Gosh. I found a story I wrote in Grade 7. [I'll be going into Grade 9 in the years of 07/08] LOLS. Refrigerator Town xD Comment on my fairy tale writing for school skills?
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Once upon a time, in a distant, far away town called Refrigerator Town. In Refrigerator town there were three special children. Their names are Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly. The rest of the children, and some adults were very, very afraid of them. Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly were practically the rulers of Refrigerator town. They were mean, mean Refrigeratorans.
But one day, a new edible thing came to Refrigerator town from Grain town. The newcomer's name was Bread. While Bread was taking a walk around the town to get to know it and its citizens he saw Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly picking on Celery. PB and J as how they liked to call themselves, had taken Celery's hat and threw it to each other making sure that Celery wouldn't be able to get it back.
Bread yelled at them to give back the hat, but they just ignored him. So when they refused to give the hat back, Bread stepped into the middle and because of his height and good hand-eye coordination he was able to catch the hat and put it back on Celery's head. Celery ran away, holding onto his hat while yelling thank you to Bread. Bread then twisted around so he could face the three, but the three had only left a red note saying that they were going to get Bread for what he had done.
Carrot saw Bread holding the red piece of paper and shouted, "Bread has been sent the notice! Everyone beware! Don't let your children near him! He did something to anger PB and J!"
Bread, not knowing of their reputation just asked, "Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly are just children, so why is everyone so afraid of them?"
Everyone came rushing into their homes, really afraid of the newcomer now. He didn't know about Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly? Everyone always made sure that every newcomer knew about the Trio and he somehow didn't know? But the refrigeratorans that were in charge of telling all newcomers about PB and J and everything important that goes on in the town remembered telling Bread about everything. So, now the big question is, why isn't he afraid of them? He had heard of everything bad that they had done, and of what they can do.
The next day, Bread was walking around again. He saw Celery, and greeted him, but the only response that he got was Celery's back, because he started to run away. Actually, now that Bread thought about it, no one had greeted him back yet when he greeted them a good morning. Then he saw PB and J picking on a teenager this time. They had taken the poor teen's wallet. Bread came up again and this time, asked for the three to give back the wallet. The three stopped and all stared at each other, like they all had a secret they were keeping but they couldn't wait until they could spill it to someone.
The three gave back the wallet and the frightened teen ran away. Peanuty then stepped forward and said, "So you're not afraid of us?"
Bread answered back, "You are only a group of children, so why would there be a reason to be afraid of you?"
Buttery answered that question, " Because everyone else is afraid of us, that's why!"
Bread repeated, "You are only a group of children, so why would there be a reason to be afraid of you?"
Jelly provided the answer this time, "Because, Bread, at any moment now, we could tell on you on our parents and because they have a high status in this town, they can do anything they want, like for instance, kick you out of this town because you're picking on us."
Bread replied with a snort, "Just because your parents have a high status in this town, that doesn't mean that you kids can get away with anything you want. So I ask, on more time, why I would be afraid of a group of children?"
All three of them shouted, "Because we can get away with whatever we want to!" and ran away.
Bread decided that he was going to do something about this. He picked up the phone and started dialing a familiar number...
This time, when Bread was walking around, he was walking with a friend. His name is Crust. They were looking for PB and J, but they couldn't seem to find them.
When they finally found the three, they were playing a game of Monoply. Crust asked, "These are the kids that you want to teach a lesson? But they look so innocent!"
Bread snorted and said, "Exactly. They look innocent. Not are innocent. There's a difference in that, Crust."
Crust just nodded and took his position. Bread walked around and got into his position. Then they ran toward each other.
SPLAT!
The two had squished together Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly inbetween them. All the kids were yelling and shouting for them to pull apart and let them go, but because of Jelly, they had all stuck togther and they couldn't get apart. So, Bread just said, "Now we are stuck together, we can learn how to get along better, instead of fighting all the time."
But after awhile, something happened and they couldn't get apart. So a new name was given to them, because now, technically, they were one Refrigeratoran they were renamed into Sandwich. After that, everything went much better in Refrigerator town.
The parents of PB and J were happy that Crust and Bread had helped them gain control over their children, so they adopted Sandwich.
THE END
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Once upon a time, in a distant, far away town called Refrigerator Town. In Refrigerator town there were three special children. Their names are Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly. The rest of the children, and some adults were very, very afraid of them. Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly were practically the rulers of Refrigerator town. They were mean, mean Refrigeratorans.
But one day, a new edible thing came to Refrigerator town from Grain town. The newcomer's name was Bread. While Bread was taking a walk around the town to get to know it and its citizens he saw Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly picking on Celery. PB and J as how they liked to call themselves, had taken Celery's hat and threw it to each other making sure that Celery wouldn't be able to get it back.
Bread yelled at them to give back the hat, but they just ignored him. So when they refused to give the hat back, Bread stepped into the middle and because of his height and good hand-eye coordination he was able to catch the hat and put it back on Celery's head. Celery ran away, holding onto his hat while yelling thank you to Bread. Bread then twisted around so he could face the three, but the three had only left a red note saying that they were going to get Bread for what he had done.
Carrot saw Bread holding the red piece of paper and shouted, "Bread has been sent the notice! Everyone beware! Don't let your children near him! He did something to anger PB and J!"
Bread, not knowing of their reputation just asked, "Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly are just children, so why is everyone so afraid of them?"
Everyone came rushing into their homes, really afraid of the newcomer now. He didn't know about Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly? Everyone always made sure that every newcomer knew about the Trio and he somehow didn't know? But the refrigeratorans that were in charge of telling all newcomers about PB and J and everything important that goes on in the town remembered telling Bread about everything. So, now the big question is, why isn't he afraid of them? He had heard of everything bad that they had done, and of what they can do.
The next day, Bread was walking around again. He saw Celery, and greeted him, but the only response that he got was Celery's back, because he started to run away. Actually, now that Bread thought about it, no one had greeted him back yet when he greeted them a good morning. Then he saw PB and J picking on a teenager this time. They had taken the poor teen's wallet. Bread came up again and this time, asked for the three to give back the wallet. The three stopped and all stared at each other, like they all had a secret they were keeping but they couldn't wait until they could spill it to someone.
The three gave back the wallet and the frightened teen ran away. Peanuty then stepped forward and said, "So you're not afraid of us?"
Bread answered back, "You are only a group of children, so why would there be a reason to be afraid of you?"
Buttery answered that question, " Because everyone else is afraid of us, that's why!"
Bread repeated, "You are only a group of children, so why would there be a reason to be afraid of you?"
Jelly provided the answer this time, "Because, Bread, at any moment now, we could tell on you on our parents and because they have a high status in this town, they can do anything they want, like for instance, kick you out of this town because you're picking on us."
Bread replied with a snort, "Just because your parents have a high status in this town, that doesn't mean that you kids can get away with anything you want. So I ask, on more time, why I would be afraid of a group of children?"
All three of them shouted, "Because we can get away with whatever we want to!" and ran away.
Bread decided that he was going to do something about this. He picked up the phone and started dialing a familiar number...
This time, when Bread was walking around, he was walking with a friend. His name is Crust. They were looking for PB and J, but they couldn't seem to find them.
When they finally found the three, they were playing a game of Monoply. Crust asked, "These are the kids that you want to teach a lesson? But they look so innocent!"
Bread snorted and said, "Exactly. They look innocent. Not are innocent. There's a difference in that, Crust."
Crust just nodded and took his position. Bread walked around and got into his position. Then they ran toward each other.
SPLAT!
The two had squished together Peanuty, Buttery, and Jelly inbetween them. All the kids were yelling and shouting for them to pull apart and let them go, but because of Jelly, they had all stuck togther and they couldn't get apart. So, Bread just said, "Now we are stuck together, we can learn how to get along better, instead of fighting all the time."
But after awhile, something happened and they couldn't get apart. So a new name was given to them, because now, technically, they were one Refrigeratoran they were renamed into Sandwich. After that, everything went much better in Refrigerator town.
The parents of PB and J were happy that Crust and Bread had helped them gain control over their children, so they adopted Sandwich.
THE END
