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Tratsis is an alien from the planet Atrayaa (at-tray-uh) a giant planet bigger than Jupiter. the planet is filled with Atrus Mantus (what Tratsis is) and Outrace Mantus, witch are there mortal enemy.
the Atrus and outrace are not the only creatures on Atrayaa, there are dragons and little cool yet dumb creatures called Spiked Mantus. All the creatures on Atrayaa all have 4 fingers, a not so movable "thumb" and only 3 toes, and a tail of course. for the green colored Atrus, it has arrows going up there tail while the red outrace tails go down, the rest of the aliens have no arrows.
***All species in Atrayaa have a unique ability, there body are obviously made differently then ours, they can't have personal thoughts. But the main difference is that they can run at supersonic speed. Now, with this power, came great responsibility (-spider man's grand father) after they run at this speed, there vision becomes delayed, as in what they see is slower then what they hear.
there master is a giant dog shaped monster named machteria (mauk-tear-E-uh) it's the size of at least 20 giraffes on top of each other, and is as heavy as over 50 elephants! plus, this big guy is the creator of the Atrus. yep, thats right, this mighty beast made the 1st ever Atrus mantus EVER!!
no one knows where the outrace came from, but no one really cares, they just were born, lived to killed, there an evil species that only think of them selves (if they could think, he he) while the Atrus try to be peaceful but cant because of there outrace brethren.
the Atrus first meet humans when there planet gravitated into the milky way, making it visible from earth. Astronauts were then sent to Atrayaa as soon as as NASA could build a rocket capable of getting there safely. one of those astronauts was a former sword fighter named CJ. CJ is a 17 year old boy who lives in Boston, California who, once he saw Atrayaa, knew that he just HAD to go there.
the astronauts made it to atayaa in less time it takes to go to the moon. When they make it there, they end up in the middle of a battle between the atrus and the outrace, seeing the as alien monsters, the astronauts flee. Everyone pass out at the sight of the aliens, except CJ, so he flue there rocket back to earth by himself. Half way there, he notices theirs some one else on board (besides the astronauts) he looked around and saw one of the aliens lost on there ship! It was Tratsis.
Tratsis, curious about the rocket, started pushing buttons. About two minutes in, he pushed a button that basically turned off the rocket. As the rocket turned off, it started flouting down, spiraling toward earth. CJ, thinking he's about to die, started praying. After Tratsis realized what was about to happen, he grabbed CJ and jumped out of the rocket and jumped as its supersonic speed and crashed towards earth!
CJ and Tratsis landed in the middle of New York, but as you can imagine, a teen and some alien thing just falling from the sky can spark quite a fracas! Every one was panicking and yelling in every direction! Tratsis grabbed CJ by waist and just ran, over water, then eventually ran into a tree! After realizing that they only ran for less then a second... they learned where they were, in Japan. CJ was awestruck beyond belief, he thought that he was in some horrible dream, he thought he got knocked out on the rocket. During the next couple days, they slept on the roofs of Japan, only traveled at nights. All the while CJ had to deal with weird times at getting tired. But about a week later, they woke up to the sound of the Japanese army calling at them from there rooftop!
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 BLADEx64 · Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 02:39am · 3 Comments |
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