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who needs a headline with the poems I write
when will you see
that im dyeing inside
will it be when i cry
or will it be when i die
just remember it's because of you
your the reason that i cry
your the reason that i died
i tried to stop the tears
but all it did was intensify the pain
so when you hear on the news
about that kid that was
found on his bathroom floor
remember it was me and
remember it's all YOUR fault


i just put this together in 1 minute and 36 seconds so tell me what you think






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Sage-Hyuuga
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 04:44pm
cool, i say you should date brooke


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 07:22pm
Another amazing one. These always amaze me.



Tantagel
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Chocotate
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 07:45pm
it's sad crying


commentCommented on: Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 12:39am
nice poem bruda!



show_me_ucare
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FallOutBoyFan23
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 06:13pm
I love it!


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 03:25pm
wow for some1 who just made that up in less then two minutes its awesome!!!



allyouwantandmore
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nettabetta
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 22, 2007 @ 07:38am
its really touching


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 03:26am
As usual, very moving, and of course super great. I still cant believe how fast you write these... do you feel that way? just wonderin



roxymhr100
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mcr666emogurl666
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 15, 2007 @ 12:54am
wow thats so deep, i can feel the emotion u placed in that........and under a min and a half, wow


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 20, 2007 @ 05:37pm
awwww thts so sad!!!! i like it!! its really good!!


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"Quack Quack Quack."
Translation:
"I Love You."

Hellolove101
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xits just mollyx
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 02:31am
wow.
some of the best stuff can come up in a matter of minutes.
amaziing.


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