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Damaged. . . (Poem)
Damaged. . .


Cut... SLASH!!!
Your soul tears apart
This is the blade
That damaged the heart

You've held that blade before
And cut others, too
And sometimes you even
Used it on you...

That blade is sharp
And causes commotion
Because it's not just a blade
They call it "Emotion"

Deep down, it hurts
And from the pain you feel
The damage seems
Like it'll NEVER heal

As time passes by
Pain all goes away
Only to be damaged
Yet another day

But, don't give up hope
Cutting is just one part
Because that same blade
Also heals the heart

It may seem confusing
But, without a doubt
The blade can keep things in
And block them out

And for those I have cut...
I apologize...
For bringing such grief
...And tears to your eyes

If that blade could kill
If only it will...
I'd cut myself DEEP
And watch the blood spill

And I'd only regret that
I had cut others...
I'd take all my lashes
...From one, then another

But, like I said before
I can't give up hope
And if sorry doesn't work
I'd have to cope

I'm sorry all...
I'm sorry my friend...
If I can ever
...Call you that, again

You've felt LOTS of damage
And I have the same
It's not your fault, please don't be sorry...
...I'll take all the blame...

Japan Underground ™
Paul Peterson ©2007






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smeli_meli
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 29, 2007 @ 08:40pm
wow... your a real poet


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 12, 2007 @ 12:10pm
dang! ur very good at poetry!!! ur better than me!!! and u are forgiven!!!!!!!



BlueDragonMasterGuRl
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malenyah1990
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 12:08am
OMG! that was so great i started to cry! your yhe best poetry guy ever! i wish i was your girl then you will write a poem for me! love: malenyah1990 heart


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 03:02pm
Wow. You really are a good poet. Your profile is gorgeous too, good sir.
See you around.



Lady Baroque
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Lady Kittens
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 12, 2009 @ 09:52am
This poem just made it to the top of my favorite poems.
Very true.
Reminds me of facing reality.


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