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Merciless Thoughts
Poems, thoughts and other things
why
why is it always me...*starts a poem*
In the white shadowed glow of the cold moon
I try to hide my shame and sadness for all the ones i have hurt
Although I can not hide from my mistakes I try and then weep
And I wish that the ones i have hurt with my words and actions will forgive me.
I wish them to forgive me for my cold words of sadness
And as all my hope fades I whisper "save...me."
And as those last words fade so does my will to live and I weep
And I continue my life as a black rose.....
*ends poem*






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Literary Device
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Thu Jun 30, 2005 @ 12:34am


Great. Evocative, descriptive and striking! An A in my book!


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