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:: Down the Rabbit Hole ::
Chapter 5-- Finale
“My heart stood still as if it didn’t deserve to beat in the presence of him. Then just as I thought he couldn’t be any more beautiful he smiled and my heart froze and then melted again. He stood there, and I stood there; waiting for the silence to be broken.
‘Your heart may resume it natural course, for I am only-’he chuckled at this, ‘well, partially human.’
I stepped forward and laid my other arm on his glowing hand. Our eyes met and then our lips greeted each other, not unpleasantly, but… unexplainable. When my eyes opened his graceful ivory wings unfolded from his back and a halo of gold appeared above his breathtaking face.
‘Don’t cry, mi amour, don’t cry.’ He murmured. Then I noticed his feet no longer were on the floor as he floated upwards I tried to grasp his billowing cloak. My hands touched nothing and he was a hundred, then a thousand, then what seemed like a million miles away. ‘Don’t cry…’
When I formed the words I needed, it was too late and the only thing that heard them was the darkness…”






User Comments: [10]
[Demosthenes]
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Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 10:47pm


Kewl. But when is lips greeting ever unpleasant? x)


Kelephante
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 @ 02:01pm


I wouldn't know... >.< no kisses yet...


Rhiine
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 @ 05:33pm


Very good, and very arrupt. 4th chapter he says he loves her, 5th he's gone. But the writing is great! mrgreen


Kelephante
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 @ 05:37pm


Rachel~ thats the tragety of it. so... sudden, so... sad... crying i cried when i wrote it. *sniffle*


Rhiine
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Thu Dec 27, 2007 @ 05:45pm


You don't know me. I love you. You love me. I have to leave. You break down. The end.

If you wanted it to be sudden you could have just done that. the end.


Kelephante
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Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 03:28pm


huh? okay......................... question


Rhiine
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Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 08:31pm


you didn't understand that???? u have more issues than I thought.


Kelephante
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Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 08:40pm


shutup crying


Rhiine
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Fri Jan 04, 2008 @ 09:19pm


NO!


Kelephante
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Thu Feb 28, 2008 @ 02:59pm


YES!


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