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I usually post bits and pieces of my work as a writer. Check it out if you're interested. Occasionally I'll input some stuff about what's going on with my life or ask for inspiration or encouragement, so look for that too!
~ Oath of Freedom ~

The howl of a wolf,
A hunter's cry,
A majestic sound
Of ancient time.

Answered only by kin,
Excluded only by men.

Drifting through the midnight breeze,
The howl of a wolf,
Majestic and free:

A freedom tamed
By the men of this world,
Whose eyes are clouded:
Clouded by hatred,
And clouded by fear.

But to see with eyes untainted;
Untainted by lies,
And by false angers and cries,
Is to witness a true miracle:

A miracle of Nature,
Isolated by men,
But more beautiful
Than Earth in itself...

The howl of a wolf,
A hunter's cry,
A mystical oath;
The oath of freedom.


Well, that's it!! I wrote this poem this morning. ^_^ I still need to do a little editing on it, it gets a little choppy at points, but other than that I really like it. :3 Tell me what you think!! biggrin ^~^






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Nyladel Okami
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 10, 2008 @ 04:27pm
i like it!!! verryy niccee ^.^


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 10, 2008 @ 06:42pm
mrgreen Thanks!! ^~^



Noumenae
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