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I usually post bits and pieces of my work as a writer. Check it out if you're interested. Occasionally I'll input some stuff about what's going on with my life or ask for inspiration or encouragement, so look for that too!
ALRIGHT! Three poems in one day, I'm on a roll~! X3
The first one actually kind of goes along with the last one (PREV. POST) and was written before it. I found it and now am deciding to put it up here. The second one I had started, and only just finished. ^^ XD

~ My Life ~

Days pass by,
And with every passage of time,
The dense mist suppressing my mind
Grows thicker and leaves me blind.

It's mutating my mind,
Transforming it
Into a maze,
A labyrinth of haze.

My memories fade
With ever passing day.
They forbid me from focus,
Yet disallow their recall.

I'm unable to see
The things before me
For what they are,
As what they seem.

But the sound of your flute,
The sight of your face,
It awakens me,
Allows me to see.

To see what's before me,
To comprehend, remember.
For without you, I'd be
A doll, or a zombie,

Controlled by Fate,
Driven only by survival.

But by your side, I understand,
That here is where I belong.
You're my life,
My life you prolong.

~ My Life ~

~ Wolf's Call ~

Look upon the midnight sky,
Gaze up at the stars of white.
See the divinity they shine,
And note the magic of their light.

Stare upon the moon up high,
A full, pure circle,
Divine and ivory,
Amidst the sky
Of ebony.

And listen to the wolf, its call,
Rising slowly, before its fall,
A howl of sorrow,
The hope of tomorrow.

Hear the cries, they ring
Through the sleepless night, echoing,
Whether they be howls of pain,
Or cheerful songs of play,

They'll always make their way
'Cross the midnight plains,
Endless divine tunes,
As long as there's a moon.

~ Wolf's Call ~

THAT'S IT~! *Cracks fingers* Ow... anyway yeah! XD COMMENTZ <3'ed! :XP:






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Nyladel Okami
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 07:48am
wow Neo!!! I really like them both!!! i really like the first one and the second one is pretty amazing also!! A.W.E.S.T.R.I.C.K.I.N.G. (idk if i spelt that right... T^T *head desk*) anyways i really love them they're both awesome!! Continue writing you have extreme talent and never stop! I hope one day i'll be able to write as good as you can! ^^ take care Neo!


commentCommented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 12:07pm
Lol THANKS!!! =DDD ^~^
Lol don't worry I don't have a clue how to spell that either o-o anyway.. ^^ Haha yeah.. thanks! I'm sure you will, just keep going =3 ^.^



Noumenae
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