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Lamia's Life
Lamia's love
I awoke in my room and stretched. I went out on the deck and saw the crew working like everything was ordinary. I walked away from them and headed into the city. I reaked havoc upon the populus, letting go of anger through the kill. I went back to the ship and slept till the next evening. I again awoke to normal crew doing normal crew things. I then went to the vampire bar bred out of my immmortal mind. I walked in and sat in back. I stretched out and laid on one of the many couches. I closed her eyes and let my mind drift.

I felt a vampire coming towards me. I opened my eyes to see a young vampire standing over me, observing me. I blinked.
"Zach?" I asked not believing what I think I saw. The vampire smiled and sat next to me.
"Oui, mon amour." he said telepathically smiling at me. I sat up and embraced him. He was really here. My fledgling, my love from Paris from years ago. He was back when I most needed him.

"You came at just the right time, mon chéri." I said tears sliding down her cheeks.
"I know. I heard what happened from Iasaes. He was very surprised to hear that Krytys is not mort." he said.
"I'm not mercilless all the time. He got what was coming to him." I said giving him a wicked smile.
"How long will you stay?" I asked releasing him from my grip.
"As long as you need. And as long as I can stand." he said giving me a peck on the cheek. He stood up.
"Come mon amour let us go to your house and talk, or we could go to your ship. Whichever you prefer." he said pulling me up beside him he took me out to the alleyway and held me in his arms.
"To my house, the crew need not have suspicions as to why I am taking a stranger in my quaters without introducing him." I said in a whisper falling asleep from mental exhastion. We took off towards my mansoin and headed for my bedroom. I lay in his arms blissfully dreaming as he laid me on the bed in my room to wait my awakening.






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Ryuustrasza
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Wed Sep 03, 2008 @ 11:38pm


good job, you finally learned to sperate your paragraphs! Tomorrow we'll work on numbers!

But all joking aside, this is a good entry, I like it personally. It's good, but there's no describtion of Zach crying . He's this person that the main character hasn't seen in ages and there isn't any description?

That's all I gotta say, keep up the good work! wink domokun


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