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Ok remember that story I told you about in the first entry thing I made? Well, here's a preview of it. If you are one of the few to maybe none people who actually read this, please tell me what you think because I'm a little self-conscious about my stories. Anyways, let's get to it already.

This story actually has sections with their own chapters in it, okay?


They just want to help. Help the human race. Improve all the common errors of the average human body. That's all they wanted...right? That's what everyone was told. And like good decent humans, they believed them and accepted the offer. All one hundred-fifty. They asked 150 people to be tested and experimented on, promising loads of cash. And those 150 human beings accepted it. Signed all the papers saying they were not responsible for the reactions any of them had. Such fools they were, such stupidity humans have. but then again, that's how humans are. They think they're doing what's best for their race, when in fact, they're leading to its down fall.

The 150 that were requested came from different towns, with different backgrounds. Everyone was seporated into six groups of twenty-five. Each group was places into a room with a large rectangle table. Each individual person was given a packet, along with a pen to answer some questions. After five to ten minutes since he people arrived into the rooms the scientist or doctors or whatever those people in white coats were, left the room to monitor everyones behaviors.

One of the subjects was named Luke Hawl. He was an antisocial boy from a rich family. Luke wore dark clothes in spite of his parents, mostly his father. He was curently in a disagreement with his old man, leading him to agree to such a stupid thing as this in order to get away from him. Of course this experiment may cause some damage to his'popularity status' at school but Luke never cared for such a thing. The people at school (mostly girls) claimed him the coolest guy in school because of his sexy looks. None of them reall knew him and he'll never let them. Luke ran his fingers through his spiky black hair in frustration. Why did these people ask so many questions? The younge seventeen year old, unconsciously twirled the pen in between his middle- and index-finger. He looked to see what the person the his right had put for some answers.


Okay I'm gonna stop there . Of course I've written more but i only want to start out with just that much. If I get really good comments i might post more up. Oh and if you see some grammer mistakes, please tell me!!

Ja ne!