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Avoid Saying 'Thing'
I wrote more on my story and I have come up with a title for it: Human Flaws. I changed a little bit from the last time I wrote it because I have an issue about going back on my stories and changing how I had put it as. Plus my English III teacher taught me a few rules that can help my story. For example: avoid saying the word 'thing' as much as possible which is what I am trying to do. Of course I already had four chapters finished when she told me this so I will have to wait before I can go back and correct my mistakes. Oh and another rule is do not use conjunction (I believe that is the word) words like I've, Don't, I'm, He's, and ect. She says that it is proper english not to use those words so I am pacticing on not using them when I type, which is what I am doing right now if you can not tell. Well I have to go now so ja ne!
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