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Jak'sDairy of stories
Hi names Jordan but everyone call me creazy kid or Jak.I've allways wanted to write a fantasy story(still in school so no chance)and well here it will start!
chapter 6:Betaryed!


Jordan the others where at the park at 11am.Jim was there waiting,"Ahh there you are.Come on.Move move!Mustn't waste time on talking here.To dangerus for us and Jak."Jordan felt stupid coming.Like his old man would realy come back alive in this so called forest of life.
Mattew drove them there.It took them around 2 hours to get there.Jim toold them that he was killed by a ancister of a deadly killer called Nick.Jordan was sure that he was working for Unknow,"Hey everyone.When we riveve my old man i want you all to satay out of this."Liz shook her head,Fal wagged her finger,"NO way mate.We stick to the end together."Marco said,"Fine Jordan i'll leave the group but if you need me just call."Eveyone was shoocked.Mattew was sort of the eldest but he acted if Jak was in charge.The got out of the van and Jim carried a book and a sword,"Jordan catch!"Jim told himand Jordan grabed it,"Use it well becouse ya never know when you need it.
Nick,Unknows dealy killer was following them,"Good job my pupil now when they start to summon Jak but strike the one Jordan cares most for.""Yes my master."The voice said quitely.
The reached a brige with a water fall going over it and under it,"Force shield of magic.looks normal on he out side looks wierd on the inside."Jim explaned.After a tiring walk they mad it to a stone with ten names on it,"Jim your name and Jaks name is on it...way?"Liz asked and Fall looked around.Around them were 8 swords with graves behide them,"Child this is the graveyard of the ten rebils."He opend the book and started to chant the some wierd words,"everyone repeat..."They all did.
In the otherworld Jak started to glow,"Allright Jim.Ya did it!"Jak dissapeared in flash and was teleporting from that world to the leaving world,"The fool.He took a grimreaper with him hahaha."Said a man his face coverd by a mask.
As Jordan and the others chanted,Nick gave the signal to his pupil to strike and so he did,"Die Liz!Flame bomb!"Marco shouted and shot a fire blast at Liz hitting her into a tree,"!LIZ!..How could you..."Jordan said.Fal and Mattew ran to her.Jim didn't know what to do but went to help liz becuase Jordan eyes were filled with hate now,"I trusted you...And you tryied to kill Liz!"He pulled out the sword from it holder.He has holding it as if he had fought with it before,"hahaha Jordan Jordan Jordan.I Picked the winning side.Now lets get this over with!"


To be continued in Chapter 7:Once friend Now deadly Enamies





 
 
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