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Jak'sDairy of stories
Hi names Jordan but everyone call me creazy kid or Jak.I've allways wanted to write a fantasy story(still in school so no chance)and well here it will start!
Chapter 14:Brave sacrafice and long goodbye.



Jak got to his feet and saw the lord of darkness inftont of him,"Oh bloody hell.This time i'll kill you."Jak said and the lord luaghed domenicly and dashed at Jak by missed,"How the?!"The lord said,"Metal fist!"Jak shouted and punched the lord into face sending him flying into hill killing him,"I told you i'd kill you."Jak said and looked up,"They better not lose."
Jim sleve were allin ashes on the ground and his scarf sliced of his neck,"Grim you have no right to kill the living!"Jim said kicking the grim in the ribs,"I must have you soul.You cheated death!"Thr grim said grabing Jim and slaming him into the ground cracking his skull,"I finaly....No it can't be!He shouted and Jim stood up,"I said i feelpain but it doesn't mean i can die!"Jim shouted and drew a seal on the grim,"I banish you to the deepest levels of hell of ever!"He souted and the drim started to turn to dust,screaming in pain,"hehehe..."Jim laughed the fainted.
Mattew and Fal were both hiding behide trees so they wouldn't be killed by daggers threw by Nick,"Come magic man wheres the magic huh?!I'll kill you for insolting me!"He said and heard a sound of thunder,"Huh....Oh man!"He said just as he got hit by a lighting bolt,"Nice one Fal."Mattew claped and Fal bowed,"It was easy."They heard some footsteps coming and saw Marco,"Well i guess you beat Nick..sigh well i give up.He you beat him then i'm a goner just get moving before i change my mind!"Marco said and Mattew and Fal nodded.As the passed him Mattew kicked Marco in the head knocking himout,"Just incase he would try to kill us."He said.They both ran in the direction of Unknow location.The saw Jordan up ahead with Liz,"Lets all take him down!"Mattew said and Jordan nodded.
The opened a door and Unknow stood there.It was like he was waiting for them,"Finaly.I will kill you all and rule this land,this world!"He said running at them so fast He knocked Fal,Liz and mattew out of the room,"And so no more pest get in."He said he cast a spell making a invisable wallat the only entrence,"Jordan look out!"Liz shouted as Uknow tried to slice Jordan in two,"You better shut up little girly or i'll kill you first!"Uknow said his voice domenic like,"Don't you dare lay a finger on her!"Jordan said and his sowrd started to glow,"Light sword!"Jordan and a sword glowing a bright white appeared in his hand,"Hahaha is that all?You should fear me.Darkness Blade!Lend me you power!"He said turning half demon and human form,"hahaha.Now to open the portal to hell!"He said and slice the air,"You have 5 minutes to stop this or you all are dead!"Uknow said,"I will kill you!I must!"Jordan said running at him slamming his sword onto Unknows sword,"What the....."Jordan said as Unknow kicked him away and stabed Jordan thought the chest,"Jordan!"Mattew,Fal and Liz shouted.He was berly standing on one leg,"Damm it..."He said as he spat out some blood,"Nice move but it won't stop me!"Jordan shouted and ran at Inknow,"This fight will end now!"Unknow said dashing at him.The both sliced at each other,each going to on endof the room,".....Ghaaa!"Unknow shouted as he fell to the floor dieing,"Your....to...late...."He said and died.Jordan was walking over to the portal,"Liz...tell everyone...I'm sorry I couldn't make it out here alive...but i'll be back one day.."He said steping closer to the portal,"Jordan don't.If you go in you'll close it but lose your own life don't do it!"Fal said.Jordan turned and faced the smiling,"Mattew take care of Liz for me...."Jordan said and fell back werds into the portal.The portal closed as he fell in all the way.The only thing that was left of him was the sword,"Jordan!"Liz shouted as the place fell apart and she was draged out by Mattew.He grabed Nick and Marco and got out side.
Jak ran up to them,"We won...but wheres Jordan?"Liz was crying and Fal didn't know what to say,"He's dead Jak....he gave up his life for us....but he said he'll be back on day...."Liz was holding Jordans sword,"He will...i just know he will."Jak said.
The world was saved by them.They swear not to tell a soul what had happend.Its almost been a year now since the battle and everyone still waits for Jordans return.

The end of Book 1:THe worlds last hope.





 
 
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