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Ruizu's Journal!! YAY!!
umm..I'll put like whatever in here. So yeah feel free to read!!`
Lost on a Road Not Found


Warmth, the sun was shining
Depth, these feelings take things too far
Solitude, my presence acknowledged, yet I feel as if I’m invisible
Divided, our friendship is only an illusion.

The light teases me,
To come out, to please
The light deserts me
To leave me, ever so dark and desolate

Integrity, it seems as if I am alone in my goals, my values
Pain, hidden beneath a secret mask, never to be revealed
Love, yearned for, but never earned
Tears, an sign of emotion I seem to lack

The dark had captured me
To latch itself on, never to leave
The dark has killed me
To have drained me of all pleasure

Death, waiting to take it all
Happiness, something cherished, something lost
Sorrow, I deeply regret losing you, it was my fault for losing grip
Secrets, the darkest parts of one’s soul

The melancholy heavens mock me
To say, I shall never achieve my many dreams
The melancholy heavens aspire to subdue my wishes
To me, I have lost it all, whether or not it remains

Rain, comes to make me think and doubt even more
Emotion, cannot be explained, I feel it has become void
Reflection, when I look in your eyes I see my pain
Wither, slowly falling, losing all humanity







User Comments: [1]
MissSpiderMonkey
Community Member





Fri Feb 20, 2009 @ 03:43am


Perfect title. Love it. <3
You broke it into sections correctly, with each theme tying in together.
and i love your ending sentence.
Perfecto. *thumbs up*
I do believe that this is your best so far, as well. ^_^


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