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my literary samples
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my first short story that i have written

It was prom night and I was dancing with my best friend, Steph, I felt my stomach churning like I had butterflies in it. I let go of her hand and it stopped then I held her hand one more time and it started again. I did this several times before she started giggling which soon turned to laughing. I looked up at her to notice that she had changed to one of my guardian spirits, Mars, I wondered if this was real. Soon to realize that I had been asleep and dreaming. I woke up to the sound of my alarm and looked at the clock 6:45, there was knocking on my door. Still kind of sleepy and confused I opened the door. It was Steph
“ready for school sleepy head?” she said
By this time you are probably wondering who I am. Well let me introduce myself I am Andrew, 16 years old and I am currently attending Centennial Being High School, CB for short. I think I am starting to get the feeling that I like Steph.
“um yea im ready are you?” I replied to Steph
“aren’t you going to change first?” she asked
Me still with my pajamas on, went upstairs and chose anything I could find on the floor, put water on my hair and was ready. We started walking on Pacific Ave. when I was controlled by my other guardian, Lore.
“So Steph I was wondering if you wanted to go to the morp with me?”
I gained control before he said prom making it sound backwards.
“to the what?” she asked hopelessly confused
“ the mall with me, today after school” I said
“um yea sure I have nothing better to do” she replied
“nice save” Lore and Mars both whispered
Steph spotted them from the corner of her eye and flicked them both in the ear. Steph knew both Lore and Mars since we were 12 the first day she saw them they all got scared of each other. Of course what she did not know was that Lore and Mars can control me sometimes.
“Ouch” They both screamed
“well you deserved it” she said in her angry voice
We got to school just in time even though we still had 30 minutes left before class started. Walking through the halls of CB made you feel weird with all the posters and flyers about prom.
“one week ‘til prom” Steph told me
“yea one week, have you invited anyone?” I asked
“no not yet, I do not even think I am going” she said
Again I was controlled, but this time by both Mars and Lore too much for me to control and I said with no control
“you want to go with me?”
“um, sure I would love to, but just as friends” she seemed excited
“yea” I said finally gaining control
The rest of the week was pretty boring, with all the tests and the homework. Prom night was here and still remembering my dream from the week before, I was kind of scared of what might happen. I arrived at school just to see Steph in her beautiful dress and we went inside. I asked her to dance and she said yes. Then I felt my stomach start to churn and I let go of her hand. It stopped again I did this several times before she started laughing, but before I asked her to be my girlfriend I thought to myself Déjà vu?





 
 
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