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Prologue

Dragons, knights, war, and heaven one might call it, but with all of these there are always conflicts and events in which good conquers evil. This story starts of with a boy reading the phrase
"take the road less traveled by..."
A wise mans word, though i did not know what it meant, it got me interested. that same day many things would happen that would change my life and reveal the secrets behind that phrase.
as i walk into the quiet darkness of angelus ave. it was quiet but at the same time screaming "do not take this road". i did not listen to the voices, let me just tell you it was the worst choice i have ever made in my life.
i just thought the voices were part of my conscious, i was always told to listen to my heart. at that moment the clouds grew dark and the wind blew hard. Temperatures started to drop until the water on the streets started to freeze. Roads got slippery and a hail storm started. I tried to get shelter and ran to the nearest house, but no one seemed to be in it. i had gone to almost every house on that street before reaching a dead end finally realizing that nobody was home. i started to feel dizzy and the street started to spin. All i remember was seeing a man walking towards me in a black cloak before being confronted by a giant beast.






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Madoneko
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 07, 2009 @ 05:19am
Work on your punctuation a little bit; the writing's good but the lowercase i's make it seem unprofessional. :0

I am willing to hire you to write something quick for me, if you want the practice. c: If so, just PM me.


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