Okay, yesterday I told all of you I was going to give you a paragraph of a story I am writing about. So I have this story's name be Boy's Cinders for the reason it is suppose to be like Cinderella only boy version. So here is the paragraph. biggrin
Daniel Kyle Mac never expected for his father to die when he was six. He never realized what death meant until much later and didn’t know his father death until about the same time. Only then did he lay his first tear for his father. Daniel’s father was always nice; of course, to his son but I wonder why lay his first tear when his father dies. The boy could have laid it when his father made a hilarious joke, close enough for tears, or when he gives him a hug after being so far away for so long. Daniel only then after that first tear realized what his father meant to him.
Yes, that is the first paragraph.
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