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Alright so I think I have myself on enough of a hype to start up my magic idea box *kicks violently* Hey it works for the bumper boats (>o^)b Ahem Ima try this method: loading up a page from my Microsoft Processor every week. No one has to read this, I'm more or less stroking my fragile ego -insert godfather scene- Weeeeell. . . -nervous cough- I guess here it is -flops on conveniently placed table- this is the entire first printed page of Destroying Wonderland (title pending >o<b ) I'm prolly gonna finish up page ten soon (kinda) but seeing as how i gave my self a ridiculously huge buffer of like 9 weeks from now till that needs to be out I'm not really gonna bother about it too much (good God Im a lazy a**) Once again no one really needs to read this, I'm putting it up here because if I don't give myself deadlines or something I'll never finish and I'm so sick of never being finished. =_=ll emo whiiiiiiiiine. Here ya go gaia!
Destroying Wonderland
“Crap! That girl‘s the Cheshire, catch her or it‘ll be our heads!” A girl with short and strangely purple tinted hair bolted down the empty corridor as the “doctors” tried to break through the confused patients. The girl ran faster down the hall and pushed past her fellow white clad patients that had gathered to see the commotion. The white ghosts moved without any resistance. They were no longer interested in anything concerning the world outside their own. All they knew now was that the men in the white coats were the center of that world, they had brought them there, they decided how the world was allowed to run, and if something was bothering the men in the white coats that meant there was going to be something bothering their world shortly after.
The girl managed to make it down the hall as it parted in two, to her right was a dead end but to her left there were more men in white coats. The girl turned and took the right path to the hall, the problem was that hall ended very quickly. She managed to reach the dead end no problem, but as she turned around she could see that the men in the white coats had broken free from the patients and were running full speed towards her. The girl smiled her signature smile, “I guess it‘s now or never,” her grin widened until it seemed to stretch across her entire face. “you fellas wanna see something interesting?” she called to the terrified doctors.
“don‘t be fooled we were told this could happen,” one of the head doctors called to the others, “this is only a trick she can‘t really do that here!”
The girl’s grin still hadn’t left her face, she seemed to actually smile bigger. “oh, I can‘t can I,” she started to laugh maniacally as she did a small twirl in place, “well I guess that‘s up to you to believe. Let‘s find out shall we?” she twirled again a little faster but this time she didn’t stop she kept twirling in a circle “’twas brillig, and the slithy toves,” she chanted in a sing song voice. soon she was spinning much faster but her grin stayed in place. The room filled with ear splittingly loud laughter, the patients and doctors both covered their ears to try to block the noise. Then suddenly the noise was gone and all that was left was the giggling smile floating alone and without a body. “beware the jabberwocky my son,” it continued through its fits of laughter. Then with a pop the smile was gone and all the doctors could do was hope they would be able to find this Cheshire cat before she found her way home.

Allan sat alone in the white room, there were no windows and the door blended into the rest of the room. There were no sounds in his room, no clock to tell the time, no company to talk to. That was, until she came. It was like she had dropped from the sky, there was a pop and then she fell with a thump onto the padded floor. At first she didn’t move and Allan thought she might be dead, he hadn’t seen a person, living or dead, since he had been moved to the white room. He crawled out of his corner and closer to the center of the room where the girl was.
That was his first mistake, just when he got close enough to see the girl her eyes opened and she spun around to get him in a chokehold. Allan let out a silent cry as she held his arm behind his back with one hand and she had the other across his neck making it hard for him to breath. “who are you?” she hissed quietly, “what do you want from me? I haven‘t done anything to you people!” Allan didn’t answer, he couldn’t but the girl didn’t know that. “answer me damn it!” this time she screamed it. It must have been too much for her because after that she collapsed and fell to the floor coughing heavily.
All Allan could do was watch as the girl coughed nonstop to the point where it looked like she couldn’t breath. Then he got an idea, water, normal people used that when they were coughing, right? He had seen the coat men do it when they came to work with a cough. He crawled to the opposite side of the room and grabbed one of the water bottles that the men had left for him. They didn’t like to be near him unless they could help it so they just left him with food and water for the rest of the day in the morning. Allan crawled back to the girl and offered her the water. She looked up and grabbed the water without saying anything.

Ha ha ha ha anticlimactic you say? Idiotic even? XD . . . Yeah I know but chapters and planning a stopping point are for the weak. Speaking of that's all I have for the week X'D Luckily everyone gave up reading this crap ages ago (>o< wink v