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The Warrior within
its just a story I made with me and some friends in it.
As Suki Slept, Tori also had a really weird dream herself...

"There here, there here!" sreeched the queen loudly to her guards. All the gaurds lined on the outside of the palase geting ready for the evil little princess. She was only four years old and yet she will kill at all costs. Over the hills everyone saw a blanket of black getting closer and cloder to the palace. "my love please take our son and go south to your brother's palace." pleaded the queen. " take care my wife.'" said the king as he toke the small baby boy into his arms and wrapped his midnight black blanket to keep the little one warm in the cold air. The king kissed his wife good bye and rushed out the door before the army came to clame their prize. He ran full speed til it was dark. The king finally arrived at his brother's palase. The kning banged on the door. "hello, little brother what are you doing here?" said light-tan. "please brother you have to look after Kuroi for a little while there is a war going on up north and there after him." explained the King. "ok i will, but what about his younger sister?" asked Light-lan. " No there not after Hikari yet, she doesnt know how to use her powers yet." said the king. Light-tan toke Kuroi out of his fathers arms. "please take good care of him" said the king. Then he kissed the top of his 1-year-old son's head and tranformed into a wolf and flew back to the palace.

BACK AT THE PALACE.......

The army had come. "Shelby, its too late my son is gone and you will never find him." the queen said to the evil little girl in front of a army of 400. "well do you know why i live alone, why Im so evil?" asked Shelby. The queen gave no replay knowing she was not going to like the response. "its because I love getting my way and I live alone because last year my parnets and servents wnted me to be nice so I stole my father's gun and shot every last one of them." siad Shelby smirking. "CHARGE" screamed the queen not wanting to hear anymoreof this twisted girls life. Shelby just pointed her finger and half of the army charged as the rest disapearred in a cloud of purple smoke. The battle was fought for many days and many lifes were lost but the dark side almost won if it wasnt for the woodlen elfs that is. The elfs had to stay in the woodland area but some of the soilders went into the forest to hide and were killed there. "Mia, Mia!" screamed a elf mother. "What is it mother?" asked mia. I must help in the battle take your sister Mori and prince yasuragyand go hide" said the elf mother quickly and ran off into battle. "why do i have to look after the abandoned child, so what if his parnents just died. oh well I guess I could give him some powers so he wont be all human." thought Mia as she hide with the human child and her baby sister. Mia lad her hand on the infint's chest and put some of her magic into him. The magic to talk to animals. Since he was human he had a side-affect to this power and all of a sudden the little boy grew cat ears and a tail. "ah oh how am I supposed to explain this to mom." said Mia to herself.

FURTURE INTO THE FOREST...

The elf mother foght off as many warrroirs as she could fighting along side the queens army. One of the soilders struck the queens guard the was next to the mother, and was also her brother. The elf mother then killed him and the others. She walked slowly up to the dead man and pulled the knife out of him the was covered in blood. still holding it she said a prayer for this stranger. All of a sudden the queen came runing in to help in the fight but before she could even pull her own weapon out she saw it. Her own allie kneeling besides her brothers dead body with a bloody knife in her hand and blood that soaked her garment. " what did you do to my brother" screamed the queen as the color vainshed from her face. As she ran over to the elf, she yanked out her weapon and thusted into the women's heart. The elf laid on the grass with tear stains on her cheeks. When the queen saw this she fell onto the grass in sadness knowing what happened and that she had made a terrible mistake. Before anyone could see her, the queen ran out of the woods and into the night. But there was someone watching. Behind a tree only a few yards away watched Mia, the oldest of the now dead elf's daughers.

to be continued.....






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Dread Pirate Alex
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 20, 2006 @ 03:17am
I cant wait for the next part heart


commentCommented on: Fri Oct 20, 2006 @ 04:00am
I love the way you split everying into different segements of the story, it really pulls more detail on what's going on everywhere, so you are able to cover all characters and actions going on, and making sure the reader knows everything, Awesome Job Shannon keep it up.



neoistheone21
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Lonely_Hunter
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commentCommented on: Fri Oct 20, 2006 @ 09:28pm
thxs!u 2 are the best guy friends a girl can have! heart
and yes I do say the wolf flew and his a pic of the king in his wolf form:
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 02, 2006 @ 09:53pm
i love it! i cant wait till the next part! biggrin



Sexyfoxy12
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D0GBREATH
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 18, 2006 @ 05:41pm
That was cool, bt why am i still not in this part!!!!! scream


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 03:00am
Nick its a dream you cant be in a dream!



Lonely_Hunter
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