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The Warrior within
its just a story I made with me and some friends in it.
When we last left off with Suki and Kuroi, Suki had a very unusual dream.

Suki’s eyes flashed opened in shock, her body covered in hot sweat. “Wow that was a strange dream, luckily its over.” Suki thought to herself. She stared up at the sun and thought, “It must be around noon, no surprise there I always sleep late.” She rolled onto her side to say good morning to Kuroi but he wasn’t in his own sleeping bag. Suki sat up and saw him cooking with a frown on his face. “Morning Kuroi, What’s for breakfast?” asked Suki as she crawled out of her sleeping bag and over next to him. “We’re having the usual and it’s about time you woke up, I was about to leave you here and go explore.” Kuroi said smirking. “Jeez, someone is a bit mean today,” said Suki. Then she pulled out her knife that was strapped to her leg and held it against Kuroi’s throat. “Kuroi, my friend, I’m hot sweaty, hungry and in a really bad mood so I suggest you shut up.” Suki whispered threateningly into Kuroi’s ear. She pulled the knife away from his throat and all through breakfast and lunch they didn’t talk.
After lunch Suki decides to go explore before the sun started to set. She was also looking for a river or lakes were she could take a drink and cool down. Suki explored for hours but she finally came across a river. “YES!” yelled Suki as she ran to jump into the river. But before she could she noticed a 19-year old boy sitting on a patch on grass. “Hi what’s your name?” Suki asked sitting next to the boy. “I’m king Light-tan and this is my world. I’m just going to visit my dear sister-in-law.” Light tan said smiling. You must be mistaken cause this is moontan’s world” Suki said with a confused look on her face. “Ah I see you have meet my wife, She has the world when it is night and I have the world when it is day.” Explained Light tan. “Oh well can you help me learn how to use my powers and transform?” asked Suki. “Sorry Suki I can not, the sun is going down and soon my powers will gone.” Said Light tan. “Suki were are you? Were leaving!” yelled Kuroi. Kuroi spotted Suki at the end of the hill next to the river, walked over to her but stopped when he saw light tan. “Hey Kuroi meet my 19 year old friend Light-tan.” Said Suki smiling at him. “Well, Suki I’m really 190,000 years old.” Light tan said blushing as he looked down at his feet. “WHAT!” screamed Suki shocked. “He is also my uncle.” Kuroi said bitterly not taking his coal black eyes off his uncle’s golden eyes. “Let’s go.” Kuroi whispered just load enough so she can him. Kuroi turned around and starting waling back to their campsite. “Bye Light-tan I’ll be seeing your wife tonight!” screamed Suki as she ran after Kuroi as fast as see could. Suki and Kuroi didn’t speak for the entire trip back or while they where packing up. “I’m sick of this of hair, it’s so long.” Suki thought to herself. Then Suki took out her knife again and held it up to her hair and cut it so then it went from being down to her waist to only a little past her cheeks. To break the silence Suki said, “Ah that feels so much better!”
Then Kuroi and Suki arrived at the river where they spotted Light tan. “Kuroi are you nervous to see your aunt?” asked Suki. “No I like my aunt, I’m glad that I’m going to see her after so long. For once that entire day Suki thought she saw a small smile on her friends’ lips. Just then the sun set and the moon appeared over the horizon. A purple light shined from the Moon and Moontan appeared in front of them. “Hello Kuroi, Suki.” Said Moontan happily. “Hey Moontan how are you?” asked Suki. I’m fine, But I came to warn you, the witch’s monsters are coming to kill you. They found you sent when they found the remains of Suki’s cut hair, you must keep moving and find shelter soon before they arrive.” Said Moontan sternly as her eyes looked on to Suki's. She could tell how sad she was by leading the monsters on their trail without even knowing it.
Just then the ground began to shake and up on top of the hill stood two giant bugs. One of then being a spider and the other a scorpion. “Well it looks as though I can kill that monster tonight, I just wish tori could help, oh well.” Suki whispered under her breath, but she had an evil smirk on her face, one that would make anyone’s spine tingle with fear. She was ready to face this thing, she could fell her powers inside of her and that they were ready to burst out. “Come and get me if you want to die!” screamed Suki as Kuroi and Moontan stared at her is shock and disbelief. Kuroi has known Suki since she was 11, she would always talk tough and act brave but inside everyone she was just a shy, innocent girl who just want to be noticed. This time it was different, Gary could tell this time it was for real. Moontan could feel the fighting spirit inside of her. She knew she was ready to face these monsters alone. As the now charging monster bugs came at Suki, the more determined she got. Suki’s eyes turned from the crimson red to the same midnight black color eyes as Kuroi did and her hair went from its orange-brown to a royal blue color. Blue and Black energy swirled around Suki’s hands as she went into a fighting stance peparing for the battle. When the Bugs got close enough she fired the crystal blue and black energies that the bugs. The two powers merged together turning into a dark ice tornado like blaze as the ice and dark powers flew through the air it hit both the bugs sending one flying and the other frozen in its icy grave.

Are the monsters dead? What caused this incredible power to come from Suki?
Find out next time. To be continued…






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[ Burnt Out Toaster ]
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 19, 2006 @ 09:19pm
You know I love your story! -comments-


commentCommented on: Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 12:00am
wow it's really awesome Shannon, great job on it, alot of suspense at the end.



neoistheone21
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Lonely_Hunter
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 20, 2006 @ 12:34am
Ik know that you love my story Alyssa and thxs neo the next part should be coming out soon and it will have the rest of the fight.


commentCommented on: Sun Dec 31, 2006 @ 12:11am
Wow that is really good!



Silly_Pickle_PeanutButter
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D0GBREATH
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 07, 2007 @ 10:42pm
I want to come back! crying crying crying crying crying crying crying cry cry cry crying crying crying crying crying


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