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PinkuGyu
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Fanfiction:by:chibixhinatax07
New Generation!!!! heart
Im trying to write fanfiction,k so don't hate if is not good.

"ow crap, i gotta hurry!" said Enisu Uchiha. "now where did i leave my bag!" she told herself as she shuffled through her things, in her ever dirty room.
"enisu dear, your bags downstairs" said a voice from down under.
"Thanks, mom" enisu replied and ran downstairs, where there she meet her mother sakura, who was preparing breakfast.
"over ther on the sofa" instructing her.
"cool, thanks love you bye" she waived and headed to the door. but her mother stoped her.
"wait don't you want breakfast, you of course need you energy" she explained.
"naw sorry, ill eat at school, going to be late meeting tetsuki" replieing and was gone in a flash.
"ah.that girl full of spunk" sakura said shaking her head. "now i got one more and hes a hand full" trotting up the stairs to wake her sasuke, to tell him his breakfast is ready.

Hurrying to make it on time to school enisu decided to see if tetsuki her best friend had left already.
"Tetsuki!..oh! hi nara-san" suddenly to see ino yamanaka smiling. "im sorry but has tetsuki left" asking her.
"no she haveing a issue crisis at the moment" replieing as both could hear that tetsuki was yelling upstairs.
"damn there nothing good to wear!" Feeling embarassed ino went to quiet her.
"tetsuki hurry up your going to be late!!!!" and with that tetsuki came rushing down. "now there, have fun at school my suki-chan" tetsuki rolled her eyes.
"come on"grabbing enisu.
"well by nara-san"jestering a goodbye
"ok, and say hi to your mother" ino replied waving goodbye.

So what do you think am i good??? thats up to you!!!!






User Comments: [3]
loki the white
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 @ 06:28am


i thought it was really cool and would like to hear more about it biggrin ninja


loki the white
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Tue Apr 03, 2007 @ 07:50am


are you going to make so more question
please make some more 3nodding razz
3nodding 3nodding 3nodding razz razz


cartergirl
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Sat Jul 21, 2007 @ 10:03pm


yeah it was good , you left us hanging though ^_^ give us mooooooore like her day at school and crazy stuff to happen and ect. I have a little story thingy it's about my character Weiko , but it's only the first epi. all of the other episodes i made got lost on the computer sad but jessica loved them , would you like to read it ?


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