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RANDOM IDEA
OK
MY POEM
I love you so deeply, I love you so much.

I love the sound of your voice, and the way we touch.

I love your kind, thoughtful way.

The joy you bring, to my life everyday.

I love you today, as I have from the start.

And I will love you forever, with all my heart.



I wrote your name in the sky, but the wind blew it away.

I wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away.

I wrote your name in my heart, and forever it will stay." heart heart






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DarkShadowsDemon
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 05, 2007 @ 02:44am
that is so sweet. i love poetry^^


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 13, 2007 @ 09:37pm
ah thats so beutiful. cry



Toxic Skunky
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 20, 2007 @ 04:20am
Cute! Nice idea, good ryhming, love the last three lines! Yes, that's right, I'm a total poetry geek. twisted You should check out some of mine in my journal, but it's not quite so ... uuuuhhhh .... well-meant. Whoever it is that you're so psyched about and is the reason you keep making comments and declarations about love is very lucky. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Feb 10, 2007 @ 03:57am
that's the most beautiful thing i've ever read!!!!!!!! cry



Gina Insanity
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x_Graveling_x
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 06, 2007 @ 02:03am
Did you write that? It looks like you just copied and pasted. Maybe if you normally typed like that (aka with good grammar, punctuation and spelling) it would be more convincing. Sorry, not buying it!


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