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The Eight, Powers of The Angels
A powerful story regarding the destinies of several humans thrust with the task of saving the universe, with a twist. [Updates delayed]
Prologue 1:The Beginning Of The Eight [Edited 9/13/09]
Eight crystals containing the powers of the eight different elements that make up our world were the prized possessions of the Grigori, or the fallen angels of Heaven. These crystals were destined to be for the young people who would champion the cause of restoring the Grigori's place in Heaven, after they were cast out in a bloody civil war.
This was how it would have been, if the Grigori hadn't been hunted and killed by Cruxis, the angelic organization that had expelled the Grigori from Heaven. For the last several millennia, Cruxis deemed it necessary to annihilate the Grigori for their crimes against Heaven. The organization sent its angels scouring Earth for the Grigori and in the first few decades of this conquest, the Grigori's numbers were decimated.
In order to keep up their strength in numbers, the remaining survivors banded together. They sacrificed some of their divine abilities in order to blend in with the growing human population. After teaching learning from the humans, as well as teaching them some of the Grigori ways, they had established a permanent settlement of their own in hopes of finding and training the Eight Champions of Heaven to fight the army of Cruxis.

That plan also went awry. Spies infiltrated the settlement and all those within it were massacred. Cruxis left the smoldering remains of the city, believing their plans
had been fulfilled.

What the agenst did not know was that a small troupe of scouts seraching for the humans had left the compound for the day. When they came home to their city, they were astonished and burdened with grief to find it razed and burnt to the ground. the bodies of their friends and families were reduced to the shards of Life Light that they had begun from and left to die out.
The only thing left intact was the sacred box that held the crystals. But the case had been opened and most of the gems in the box were missing, obvioulsy stolen or taken by wild animals. Before leaving, the final Grigori took the rest of the crystals away with them. They intended to find the humans that would bond with them and bring them back to Heaven.

Erebus Haze
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  • User Comments: [10]
    crazyamygamer
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    Wed Mar 14, 2007 @ 12:54am


    Hey this isn't bad, can't wait to read more... That also might be the cool beginings of a roleplay with the right people...


    Dismal Voice
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    Wed Mar 21, 2007 @ 08:38am


    It needs a little polishing, but it's alright.


    the Escapade
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    Thu Mar 22, 2007 @ 01:24am


    Is this the prologue or the first chapter? If a prologue, it’s a good start and would like you to continue. If it’s a chapter, you have to work on it a bit more. xD


    Travelgirl2009
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    Sun Apr 01, 2007 @ 11:15pm


    it's a good beginning. i like it. just keep working on it. biggrin


    mayday22
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    Sun Apr 15, 2007 @ 06:57pm


    A few spelling errors were found and a lot was thrown out right away. I like it though, keep working. All I found were the things I expected to going in.


    l r o n e e
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    Sat Apr 21, 2007 @ 12:27am


    i like the use of words very nice well ill see you on the rp


    Maramas
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    Thu Jun 28, 2007 @ 05:10pm


    Needs some grammar help, as well as spelling, but it's not a bad start.


    me so sexxxy
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    Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 12:12am


    i shall allow myself to read one per day so i can fully understand and appreciate your work. now onto your work... a little spelling issues here and there but they are irrelevant. i'm a little off, which is a good thing because that makes me unable to guess what will happen or how will things play out. you also have a thing more saying just about enough for me to feel that things aren't over explained or under explained. as for a prologue very good. i'm looking forward for tomorrow.


    Slick Southpaw
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    Fri Jun 20, 2008 @ 07:47am



    السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته
    you have a lot of potential, but you seriously need a lot of work.... sweatdrop i feel bad, since I only read the prologue.

    Let me suggest something to you that I think would be a of great assistance: fix your word choice, and thesauruses are your friends.

    You say three times within the first two sentences, and you need to work on spelling.

    and not focus so much on numbers...




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