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Monkey Airplane Soldier
Be kind, please rewind.
The Hamster
Watch the hamster on its wheel
Runs to nowhere that is real
When he thinks he’s made progress
He realizes the fight’s worthless

Plays the game ‘til his feet wear down
Tries to squeak, but there’s no sound
A strange pull traps him there
He’s the only one who will play fair

Weeks go by, then months and years
He runs to escape his fears
And ne’er leaves, though he is sad
The strength for that he’s never had

Something there he loves too much
He can’t abandon its sweet touch
As painful as it is to run
This hamster sees the hidden sun

For in far days, yet to come
He thinks he may not have to run
He sees a light that gives him fire
And somehow he knows…
He won't yet tire.






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Captain Dandy ^.~
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commentCommented on: Tue May 01, 2007 @ 03:27am
.......so sad.....yet then, so depressingly happy...


commentCommented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 03:13am
I agree with Claire.... gosh... it is SO sad... but then again.. the ending makes me happy inside.



Fluffy Smut
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the silver fire
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commentCommented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 03:16am
Thank you guys!
It makes me happy that you liked it. I liked it.
I feel like a hamster right now, is the problem. But I'm the hamster before the end of the poem. SHOOT ME.


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