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Dark Chronicles.
Is the story of chiaosy a paladin that became the wander of the abbys. i hope u can help me cuz i might public it in a book depends on how good u think it is.
Cap 1 cont.

As all of them sees the balor they started to back off a little with their weapons on hand.
Ashrad: what in the name of blatina?
White armor girl: i have never seen something like this!
Balor: who dares to summons me?
He said with a strident sound, the necro smiled to see that a balor answer his call.
Necro: i did it. i summoned u here!
Balor: with what purpose have you summon me?
Then ashrad points her sword at the balor.
Ashrad: foul creature! i will send u to the place that u belong in the name of blatina.
Balor: uh?
He sees all the soldiers that were in there and all of their weapons in hand.
Balor: Ah! blatinas peons thinks they have the strenght to hurt me.
He ignores them and turn to the necro again and he was anxious seeing the Balor.
Necro: i am your new master and i command u to destroy them!
Balor: you! my master? HA what makes u think u have the power to control me imbecil!!!!
Necro: what? i summond u here, which means that u must obey me!
Balor: i only obey lord asmodeus! u are an insect to us!
He just lift one of his fingers and the necro turn to dust.
Ashrad: it cant be!
Balor: now that this has been taken care off i shall deal with Blatina's servants.
White armor girl: no if we can stop u first.
Balor: and how do u plan to stop me?
All of them took their fighting pose and the balor just stayed still.
Balor: come my minions and take care of them...
A black mist start spreading trough the cave and a group of dark creatures start poping out from the mist. The soldiers start fighting the creatures. both of the knights droped their capes and start fighting with the creatures. both of them were fighting a few of them at the same time vanishing all of them. The balor was suprised on how both of them were taking care of his minion.
In a matter of a breaf moment both of them vanished all of the minios while protectin their subordinates.
balor: im impresed! i never though that blatina possesed such skilled warriors in the mortal world!
ashrad: you are next!!!!
She trew her self toward the balor and attaked him but he just bloked with his sword and hit ashrad with his forearm and send her to a wall, she crashed to the wall, the soldiers jumped toward the balor and he just send a blast that efimerate them.
White armor girl: NOOO!!!!
She slashed the balor in the back and he just move 2 step and turn to her hitting her and sending her to a wall, she tumble and execute a flip stomped on a wall and trew her self toward the balor again and attack him back but he banished in mid air and reappear at her back and hit her with his whip breaking the plate of her armor, she crashed to the ground.
He walked toward her and was ready to stab her on the floor but ashrad trew her sword and hit his arm with the fire sword cutting it, the arm fell to the floor and the balor drop his whip and pointed her.
Balor: that was a foolish act! die!!!!
He was going to send her a flame wave but the white armored girl quickly standed up and spear the balor running toward a wall, she crashed him in it and jump back.
White armor girl: Ice Burst!!!!
A blue blast rushes toward the hole in wich the balor was creating an huge ice block.
White armored girl: Icicle desaster!!!!
She hits the ice block with her sword a breaking it in thousands of pieces.
white armored girl: that must have taken care of him...
his arm came out from a dimentional hole and grabbed her by her neck.
Balor: I never imagine someone in the mortal world could posses such a power.
Ashrad: let her go!
Ashrad attack him and he just hit her sending her toward a wall.
Balor: it could be a waste to kill u here!
white Armored girl: GRRR lte me go!!!
She kick him in his chest but he didnt even move.
Balor: i will leave for now but will let u a present!!!
He introduce his hand in her chest in ghoust shape and the white armor girl open her eyes very wide and she couldnt breath.
white armored girl: AGGGHHHH!!!
All of the sudden a black energy start entering in the girl's body. she started to loose her strength and lost concience. right after that he took out his hand from her chest and drop her on the floor. ashard saw that.
Ashrad: CHIAOSY!!
She yeld and the balor just see her and smile.
Balor: i will let u live and those out side. only for u to suffer.
Ashrad: what did u do to her?
Balor: i gave her a gift. u will wish that u have died here... JAJAJAJAJA...
A red portal opened and the balor grabed his hand and entered the portal leaving the sword and whip on the ground. Ashrad headed toward chaisoy and grab her.
Ashrad: Chiaosy answer me!!!!
She try to feel her pulse and after a moment she felt it.
Ashrad: she still alive, i must hurry to the cathedral!!!
Ashrad pick her up and took the weapons with her too, she takes chiaosy to her horse and the soldiers that reminded outisde helped her and the headed to the cathedral...

TO BE CONTINUE....





 
 
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