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the detective
Episode 1: the problem
The dark and abandoned warehouse seemed...well...abandoned save for a few evil laughs and some muttered plot.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Those Durem fools think hey can stop me! After that last defeat at the hands of that cursed detective, Brattymatt agent 64! But NOBODY can stop...MR.MEANIE! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!! With my newest creation Joe-Bob the chiken, i will take down the marketing central building therefore maknig trading and selling and buying much more difficult! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! THus my granted, slightly corny, and totally pointless nefarious scheme( aren't all villans?)shall become true!

aaaaand, thats when Brattymatt came bursting through the highest window, making his descent from boxes to floor.

brattymatt: "It is over Mr. Meanie! i heard everything! you will never get away with this!" he shook his fist angrily, and went on, with his heroic ranting.

"ranting?" brattymatt said at the narrator, "i am probably jsut letting Mr.Meanie know who is going to win, that's all."

Narrator: fair enough.

Mr. Meanie: everyone who is reading this, which are a select few, given the creators story making skills.

???: HEY!

Mr.Meanie: Oh you know its true, matt, anyways, detective, you might have stopped me last time, but i have the upper hand, with my newest creation, JOE-BOB THE ROBOTIC CHICKEN!

BUKAWWK!

Brattymatt just looked at the monstrocity with caution, before firing at its vital spots with his silver revolver , at least, that was would have happened.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! what is the matter detective? where are your weapons?

Brattymatt64: i will have a gun, when people give me the proper money so i can buy one, but that does not mean i cant take down this gigantic, robotic, excuse for a NUGGET! with those PWNING words, he fired a thin cord from his timex(tm) watch, and latched onto the metal bars no the top to land on JOE-BOB and push the convenient OFF button on the back. "Not much harder than shadow of the colossus, and half as fun", he muttered, as he jumped off the robotic chicken as it came crashing down...right on Mr. Meanie. Brattymatt64 looked at the mess and simply snapped his fingers, and on command, three teams of S.W.A.T. came rushing in, to take the robot apart. Brattymatt64 walked into the outside parking lot, where he met his boss, head of the I.I.T.Y.I.W.H.T.K.Y. agency. "You did good today, detective, now i have another job for ya." "sure, boss what is it?" Brattymatt64 said.
Lanzer: well, i need you to...WAKE UP!"

*DREAM BLUR*

*TO BE CONTINUED*






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ReigntheFur
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commentCommented on: Sat May 03, 2008 @ 11:04pm
Dude! First post and funny!


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