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Hi names Jordan but everyone call me creazy kid or Jak.I've allways wanted to write a fantasy story(still in school so no chance)and well here it will start!
Chapter 1:The world of darkness


Chapter 1: The world of darkness

20 year ago a war was held across the world. Darkness had conquered the world. Everyone was scared of the unknown leader of the darkness except a rebel group of 10. They fought and tried to make others join them but didn't get any other brave members to join.
It was one stormy night that all would come to an end. A horrible battle took place between both leaders. Jak, the leader of the rebels won but he lost his right arm. He and 4 other rebels were the only ones to live, "Jak we did it! We finally won! "shouted Mike, "Yahoooo! That would show them. Light always wins. The darkness is gone forever!" Sean said jumping in the air with joy. Jak on the other hand stood there staring at the corpse of the king of darkness,"...The darkness will return...."Jak said worried. Everyone stopped moving "Huh? But the king of dark-" Mike said but was interrupted by James as he said, "He may be dead but that doesn't mean he didn't have a child...right Jak?" "Correct James....Everyone listen...I want you all to head back to town and say the darkness is gone and I died in battle!" Jak ordered and turned his back to them, "HUH! WHY!? YOUR JOKING ABOUT THE LAST PART RIGHT?!" everyone said but Jak shook his head, "I'm not joking...this way everyone will know the truth...Guys I will come back but until the darkness is back I must leave.. Farewell my friends. "Jak said crying as he walked away.
This battle is now know as the best selling book all over the world which is called "The worlds last hope" .As we speak Jak is still alive but hidden from the world. Unknow to him the darkness had returned but as a human child. The child name is....


TO BE CONTINUED IN CHAPTER 2






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Aeon-Love
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 27, 2008 @ 08:56pm
wow Jak... i love it already....
u have started it wel.. with all the fascinating backdrop... its intriguing.. compelling a reader to read more and more


commentCommented on: Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 07:28pm
excuse the last comment and also, to gertyglow, me and Taylor are actually working on a story. thx



seth15011994
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Aeon-Love
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 30, 2008 @ 03:35am
i disagree Seth!
i don't think u can,, write a strory even one tenth as good dorget abt ten times.
yes i know the grammer or spellings at places arn't correct but.. i love the story and love reading it.


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