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Luna's Poetry Journal.
Everyone loves poetry..especially me! Feel free to comment on my work...my masterpieces. And my...er...not-so-good-poems. Each one means something diffrent to me. See if you can figure out what each piece means! ; )
Poem
My newest poem! Tis a work of art! Enjoy.

Untitled

Music and poetry
can be found in the heart.
All you have to do
is know where to start.
Write what you hear;
draw what you see.
And don't be afraid
to show it to me.
Might be the sound
of the wind through the trees.
Or the busy buzzing
of a hive full of bees.
Could be a song
'bout the birds and the bees.
Or those brave souls
sent overseas.
A piece of art
that inspires a nation.
Or a cute drawing
of your new dalmation.
So pick up your pencil;
a paintbrush'll do.
And show this world
what means the most to you.




well? Like it? Any ideas as to a title for it? Let me know!






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Phoenix_flight
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 27, 2006 @ 02:17am
I like it very much. It sends a good message and the rhyme scheme is cute and simple. It's got some real sweet rhythm.

But I'm not so good at thinking of titles. I think it's important that you pick a title, not anyone else, because even the title is a mark of your authorship. If you want, the title can just be a favorite line, word, or phrase straight from your poem. You also might want to check out this website, eliteskills.com. I think you'd like it there.


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