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My fan fic art and random thoughts^^
[Insert cool manga name here . . . maybe the celestial quest
“Get back here!” a young woman darting from tree to tree shouted. The woman was about 5’7” she was slender and had long dark brown hair that was tied into two pigtails. She had a pair of beautiful green emerald eyes that seemed to glow as if they were emerald themselves. She had a wonderful figure and was extremely beautiful, though she did not take notice of this. She was wearing a tajiya (demon slayer) outfit; it was a sleek pair of black pants with a black top that fit tightly around her body. Over this, she had pink padding over her shoulders, elbows, and knees. She had matching sash around her waist were two strange swords called the boomerblades dangled. The boomerblades were a pair of twin swords that had two curved blades each, one at each end of the sword. They were about two feet long each and had a special effect, once thrown it would spin around and return to the owner like a boomerang.
The demon she was chasing laughed evilly “im the greatest rouge ninja demon there is,” he said, “you won’t be able to slay me tajiya!” He yelled as he darted a smudge quicker than her through the trees. He was a tall and powerful youki (full demon) who the tajiya had been hunting for a bounty; she was hired by many different villages to slay him and had yet to do so. The youki himself was about six feet tall and very lean, he wore a black pair of lose pants that was connected to his sandals on his feet, his shirt was sleeveless but he wore a black fishnet sleeves under. His hair was brown and glossy it was cut short in back but had big bangs. On his fore head he wore a headband customary to all ninja’s at this time in feudal Japan, it was a piece of thin cloth with a thin steel plate attached on the steal plate was suppose to be the insignia of his prior clan though he had rubbed most of it off so it seemed sleek and smooth. Suddenly he stopped and turned to face her. “Demon clone jutsu!” he yelled as he summoned what appeared to be an army made of clones of every type of demon she had ever laid eyes on.
“Your stupid demon I barley fell for your illusion the first time!” she said as she ran straight towards them. Suddenly out of the bushes some one jumped straight at her pulling her away just as a bird demon flew into the tree from behind her. “What the hell do you think your doing?” the tajiya screamed. The new person (also a demon ninja stared at her not expecting this answer.
“I thought I just saved your life stupid!” he hollered back. “Those are real clones stupid!” he yelled as he pointed to the swarm of demons flying towards them. This new demon was about her height with short silver hair, he wore a blue kimono as well as a ninja headband, what appeared to be a shield insignia was embedded in the steal plate, the tajiya thought this strange because out of all the ninja demons she had fought with none were of this clan.
She threw her two boomerang-like swords at them killing ten demons each. “I know that!” she cries furiously, “but I didn’t want him to know that I knew! Besides it was plan to use that bird from behind to finally slay that sticken ninja!” she yelled.

//Her plan:
1. Bird comes near. . .
2. Demon gets smug thinking the tajiyo will finally die and drops his guard.
3. The tajiya smirks and leaps onto the birds back and steers it into the demon kamikaze style. At last second jumps off and using her sword cuts him in half. //

“Now unless you want to die I would run,” she said not knowing why she cared whether he died or not. He did what he was told and stood back. She jumped up onto a white, nine tailed, neko youki’s back (apparently her partner) and created an orb in her hand “purification strike!” she yelled as the ball expanded and crashed onto the earth destroying all the demon clones.
The woman pouted. “Damn he got away,” she said starring at the ground beneath her.
The demon blinked. “Nice trick,” he said walking out into a clearing.
“She glared down at him, “unless you want to know what the other end of “that trick” feels like I suggest you leave before you adjitate me more.” She looked him up and down, “what is a hanyou ninja doing here anyway?” she asked. He fell over after she said hanyou, “a clumsy hanyou at that” she said.
“How’d you know?” he asked.
“It’s obvious genius,” she said. Landing beside him, jumping off she fell to her knees, “damn I used too much power again,” she said as her body began to shrink to one of a twelve year old. The Hanyou glared at her, and she back at him, “what are you staring at?” she asked.
He appeared puzzled, “what are you?” he asked. “You’re not a hanyou. . . are you?”
“Of course not!” she yelled disgusted by even the idea of her being a hanyou. “I am what I am and that’s none of your business.” She said as her neko transformed to a small black kitten with one tail and hopped into her arms.
By this time the hanyou was deeply interested by the tajiyo. He looked her up and down, “what’s your name?” he asked. “Im Reiko.”
The girl looked at him in this form her personality was completely different than the other; she wasn’t nearly as confidant so she wasn’t as rude. But she was still very full of pride. “I don’t have one,” she said as she turned and walked off.
Reiko tilted his head “what do you mean? Every one has a name.”
“Not me,” she said, “not anymore.” She looked at the ground. No one had called her anything since her village was destroyed and even worse she had no memories of her past before winding up at the tajiyo village, amnesia, they called it.
“Well if you don’t have one now then you must have had one . . . what were you called?”
“Would you leave me alone?!” she said still weak.
“Not until you tell me!” he said stubbornly enjoying this.
Suddenly an idea popped into the girls head one she thought that would make him stop asking her w/o her telling him. “Tell you what if some miracle you defeat me in my other form or even rarer save my life I’ll give you my name,” she said.
The hanyou smiled “I’ll get you,” he said and disappeared into the shadows.
It is here that the story begins.






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Takashidaimao
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commentCommented on: Thu Oct 12, 2006 @ 04:28am
Interesting.... I'm not really the one to judge this, though. It's sort of like a combination of Inu Yasha and Naruto, neither of which am I too fond of... otherwise, not bad. You may want to separate your paragraphs and indent them, but that's just me being nitpicky. Other than that, and a few spelling mistakes, it's great. There may be some copyright issues if you do eventualy publish it, but nothing you can't work out. Keep it up! mrgreen


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