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Contemplations of a knight
So often lost in quiet contemplations, viewing the world through wolven eyes... This is stuff. Just stuff. Stuff fueled by video games, boerdom and hotdogs. Its my personal fanfic/drawing/poetry log now. Like what you see? Leave a comment!~ :3
Yura
Moonlight
Upon this weary road I walk
To find you, my heart
To hold you close once more
Let me sing of the heavens
that hold my heart on high

Starlight
Upon this weary road I sing a song
To find you, my heart
So that one day you too may sing along
and together we may dream
of the things we knew all along

Forever I shall continue
Tread step after step
Down this beaten path
If only to see your face once more
Just grant me one instant of happiness

Rain
Oh purifying rain, fall from the coulds
So you can purify this path of lies
The one I walk upon
with feet scarred with dust
With feet heavy with regret

Wind
Wind that blows over the plains
Come forth and guide me
guide the wanderer alone
With feet scarred with dust
with feet heavy with regret

Forever I shall continue
Tread step after step
Down this beaten path
If only to see your face once more
Just grant me one instant of happiness

Forever I shall continue
Tread step after step
But to watch the world fly by
But to sing a song of joy
Maybe one day I will find you

Just grant me one instant of happiness
until that day returns
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I plan on traslating this into Japanese someday.
Though now that I look at it, its another one of Indigo's delusions. How she was told Lavitz went away on a journey and wouldn't come back. So she went out to find him herself.
Insanity drives one to strange things, no?

Commentzplz. I need to know how I can improve...






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The Wind Mage
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 05:24am
Well, I must be honest. I detest reading poetry, but this is really, really good. I actually took the time to read it again and analyze it with all the skills I've obtained throughout my years in AP english to make it better.

The path interested me, to say the least.


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