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Dark Chronicles.
Is the story of chiaosy a paladin that became the wander of the abbys. i hope u can help me cuz i might public it in a book depends on how good u think it is.
Intro.

It was a dark night, the clouds were covering a part of the moon and there were no stars on the sky.
in a plain terrein, we find a group of knights fighting against a group of feral creatures. The knights were using swords, spears and ax and some of them were on top of horses. these knight were slaughtering the feral ones. One of the beast jumps to one of the knights and grab him by his head and toss him to the ground riping his head from it body. then the feral jumps to another knight and this one slash him in mid air cuting him in half.
knight: dont fall back!!!!! keep pushing foward.
it said and it sounded like a woman. the bodies of the fallen knight were everywere so as the bodies of hundred of ferals. the female knight got down of her horse and start fighting on ground slashing and dashing through the ferals like they werent there. she clear the way and lift her right arm.
female knight: cover me for a moment!!!!!!
She yelled at the other knights and start casting a spell. an arcane circle apear surrounding her.
female knight: in the name of the holy one i command all of you to return to the dark place that you belong. ETERNAL DAMMATION!!!!
The clouds cover the skyes and thunders start crossing and falling to the ground then a red ray of light crashes to the ground creating a devasting shock wave that desintagrate all of the feral ones leaving only the knights.
Everything returned to normal and the female knight just look at her surrounding and saw all the fallen knights.
female knight: we need to give the fallen ones a proper burial! burn the bodies so they dont turn into feral ones.
knight: yes milady!!!
The knight gave a sign and they start to burn all of the remaining bodies. the female knight just make a gesture withher right arm.
female knight: in the name of blatina. let the fallen knight find eternal rest in peace...

After they finish burning the bodies of their comarades they headed toward the cathedral. They spend a few days of travels until they reached a huge town with a big casttle.
The knight headed toward the casttle and the female knight was wearing a black fullplate armor. she headed to an room and when she arrived she got on her knees. and took her helmet off. her hair was green and her eyes blue, her skin was a little dark like tang.
female knight: we have returned!!!
apostol: how was it?
female: milord! we were able to purified the place but... many of our brother died at the hands of the feral ones... im sorry i couldnt protect them.
apostol: dont worry. im sure that they are with our beloved goddess blatina.
He put his hand over her shoulders and help her stand up.
apostol: im sure that blatina is pleased with your work. now go and rest.
female: as u wish!!!
she bow her head a little and the she left the room. she start to walk in the casttle and headed to her quarters. when she arrived and entered the room it was huge. in the room there was a table with 4 chairs, 4 beds and in the center wall there was a banner with a strange simbol.
female: is good to be back!!!!
She took of her armor and sitted on the table. then another knight entered it was a female with a white armor and silver haired, her eyes were blue and her skin white...

To Be Continue






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Renzu Tienshu
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commentCommented on: Mon Dec 24, 2007 @ 11:07pm
its very interesting can`t wait to read the rest


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