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Spencer's Point of View
It had been a simple task assigned to us. I would have thought an interview wouldn't have been so hard. I had done plenty in the few years I had been in the F.B.I. It only took talking to the person, examining their actions and reactions, and taking the information accordingly. It shouldn't have gone so terrible.
But I wanted to be the hero. I wanted to do what Hotch and Derek did all the time. I wanted to apprehend the unsub without back up. It should have been simple. It was one man against two F.B.I agents, but he had the advantage of knowing his land, and he used that to his advantage. While I was chasing him in the cornfields I heard J.J scream.
J.J... the woman who had entranced me ever since my first day. I was in love with J.J, but I would never tell her that. I could never tell her that. It would be wrong... I couldn't tie her down like that. She was like a mustang. She needed her freedom.
So when I heard her scream I panicked. God help me I panicked. I decided that J.J was ten times more important than the unsub. We would find him some other time. So I started to run after her. I never thought running through corn would be so annoying until then when I heard three shots: two right after each other and then a second later another. I couldn’t wait for the corn to disappear until I could run to her and check on her. I stopped for a second and called, “J.J!” I hoped in getting a reply, but all I got was a sudden large force on my left cheek.
The force knocked me to the ground which wasn’t surprising. I mean I was incredibly thin and weak for a man my height and age. When I fell to the ground my gun skidded away from my hand. I grasped for it and someone else grabbed it. I rolled over to see who it was and there was the man who had killed so many people viciously for their ‘sins’. Already he had killed four people: two for having too much and two for adultery. All dumb, in my opinion, reasons to kill someone. Then again I never thought there was a good reason to kill someone. “Wait, wait, wait,” I started to say trying to keep the unsub from killing me.
“I could've stopped them by myself.” The man said pointing the gun at me. He sounded so… scared and helpless even though he was the one in control.
“Okay, okay.” I replied back not knowing what else to say considering I had no idea who he was talking about… unless he was talking about his dominant partner.
“I tried to warn everyone.” He replied as he continued to point that small hunk of metal at me that could possibly end my life ever so quickly.
“Just relax, Mr. Hankel, all right?” I begged him with my hands up in submission. I had to let him know I would listen to him when I was sure no one else did.
“Shoot him!” The voice suddenly changed… deeper. He had a lot more self confidence, and he held himself as so. He had stronger looking shoulders and an extremely angry look.
“I don't want to!” The voice and demeanor changed back to the weaker more submissive personality. Suddenly it hit me!! He was suffering from dissociative identity disorder or formally known as personality disorder. So he had at least two personalities that I knew of. There was the submissive and the aggressor.
“I said 'shoot him', you weakling. He's a Satan!” The tougher one said. Suddenly it felt like my life was in the hands of one man with two souls. It felt like I was sitting on the edge of a cliff and any moment the dominant could push me off, or the submissive was going to pull me to safety.
“He didn't do anything.” The weaker one said as he whimpered. This was just unnerving. I was starting to get scared.
“I won't tell you another time, boy. Shoot him!” The tougher one ordered the weaker one again.
Suddenly I saw the arm of the man reach and then suddenly everything went black.
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P.S this whole line belongs to CM, but I just... I wanted to put persecutive and some J.J & Spencer action in the end
oO- Alice Whitlock-Oo Community Member 
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