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Luna's Poetry Journal.
Everyone loves poetry..especially me! Feel free to comment on my work...my masterpieces. And my...er...not-so-good-poems. Each one means something diffrent to me. See if you can figure out what each piece means! ; )
poetry
everyone loves poetry. poems about love, life,death,friendship, nature and many other things. i've even written some of my own poem. here's a good one.

Hidden Hero

There's a hero,
hidden deep inside
the heart of every being.
It's buried under
fear and hate,
hidden by greed,
banished by selfishness
and misunderstood
by hearts of stone.
Oh, Hidden Hero,
listen to the call
of the lost,
the afraid,
the lonely.
Oh, Hidden Hero,
reveal your power to me
for the sake of those
who wish to be
set free.
Oh, Hidden Hero,
for the sake of all,
reveal your true power,
show yourself,
let your light shine like a beacon for all!
Oh, Hidden Hero,
show yourself!






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kaianami potter
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 24, 2005 @ 06:12am
Wow! Your peotry is so similar to mine except mine is really short I'll put more of my peoms in my journal. biggrin Ancore Ancore biggrin mrgreen


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 14, 2005 @ 06:08pm
thanks! most of my poems wind up long..that one was originally a page and a half long, till i fixed it up some



ladyluna2004
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Tempest Auraelias
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 17, 2005 @ 06:01pm
wow, thats good luna


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