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  • Song of Morning- Ch1 Pg9
  • Title: Song of Morning- Ch1 Pg9
  • Artist: fluffysgirl7413
  • Description: And now for page 9 for chapter 1 in the comic Song of Morning.

    Tell me what you like, what you don't. Constructive criticism is always welcome, however, flames, not so much.

    If you like the art and want to make a request, let me know and maybe we can work something out.

    Oh and if you're confused about something in the comic, just ask and I'll try to answer it.
  • Date: 07/07/2009
  • Tags: song morning chapter page comic
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Crimsonveil - 07/27/2009
  • A little bit out of proportion, the main girl in the image has the legs a girl with a much shorter body and the neck's a little long, too. Finally, that arm... it's way... too big... Overall shapes are alright, but it seems you stretched it a little too much in places.
  • Cajes the Freak - 07/13/2009
  • Her arm is longer than her leg even if it's bent.. but O.o it's too frickin long anyways. And I just dont really understand the picture..
  • dark_assassin_kitsune - 07/10/2009
  • i understand the idea of it. But I think the angling(sp?) of the two panels could have been better or more understandable if they were horizontal maybe rather than vertical. but it's quite interesting. love how he's such a ladies man and yet he only desires that danny girl.
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