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- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/23/2008 |
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- Title: My avi. Im working on it still
- Artist: serenading_silence
- Description: My Avatar Im Drawing. Im just looking for some pointers on what to fix. You Don't have to nice, it's just a quick sketch.
- Date: 11/23/2008
- Tags: working still
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Blind_in_a_day - 02/15/2009
- and the arms are too small.They should be longer than that
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- Blind_in_a_day - 02/15/2009
- It looks kinda more like a guy than a female......The muscles....huge.....uh...
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- Luna Snow - 02/15/2009
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the hips/belly is too small, and like Akane sama, her forehead is an inkling too big.
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- xX_Akane-sama_Xx - 01/19/2009
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in the right places and mostly right proportions. I just suggest fixing those things and you'll have s imply marvelous picture.
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- xX_Akane-sama_Xx - 01/19/2009
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This woman has very muscular arms, that are very short. I suggest lengthening them a little and making them less buff. Most women aren't body builders, no offense meant to anyone!
It's not her head that's too big, it's her forehead, it looks a little billboard-esque.
If you're going to keep her shoulders the same width that they are now, I suggest making her hips a little wider, and possible making her breasts a smidgen smaller.
Overall, the torso's length is nice, and everything seems to be - Report As Spam
- XxX_iTyler_XxX - 11/27/2008
- Hello, Tomb Raider! xD
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- nihonngorules - 11/25/2008
- good start, but have you thought about studying human anatomy? I find that this comes in handy.
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