- by Chyanime_X3 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 11/10/2008 |
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- Title: Anime Vampire Bite
- Artist: Chyanime_X3
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Description:
I did this for an art class, the theme was fantasy.
I love the expression in her face but... something didn't come out right on his head and I can't figure out what...
CONSTRUCTIVE critique please? - Date: 11/10/2008
- Tags: anime vampire bite
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Argden - 11/11/2008
- What Mobius said is true. If you walk through the halls of a school or any place where people may be in that position, you'll see that the person that is in the back, that person's shoulder would be showing. But overall it's great.
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- Shabby_Chic_Princess - 11/10/2008
- Maybe mouthis too square/face is too angular?
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- Mileena Chardonnay - 11/10/2008
- It's not so much his head as the fact that you can't see his shoulder... Since his shoulder is off-screen, it indicates a greatly out of proportion upper body, and that fact may subconsciously nag at the viewer's mind. Other than that, it is wonderful.
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