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  • Kissy Fishy
  • Title: Kissy Fishy
  • Artist: dnangel64
  • Description: This was done in Prismacolor and watercolor pencil. And please don't put oh it's pretty or cute or any thing like that, actualy critique it please.
  • Date: 09/06/2008
  • Tags: kissy fishy
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • worldofbooks96 - 08/24/2009
  • something about her hands look off, not that I'm one to talk. And, maybe it's just her hair, but her head looks kinda funny shaped and too big compared to her body. Where the neck conects to the rest of her body looks kinda strange also. In my opinion, you should work and adding more detail into her hair, unless you were aiming for that more cartoonish feel. it just looks weird though her face and body look more detailed than her hair. Other than that it's still a great drawing smile
  • Zen Mo - 12/22/2008
  • I think the edge of her face seems a little too broad, and her left hand thumb looks a thick near the base. Then again, it could just be distortion from the water. Other than that, the drawing looks very nice. I especially like the different colored strokes for the hair.
  • animegrl2.0 - 12/17/2008
  • Like others have said her lips look at little off... Her left hand is off as well, it looks like you forgot to color her first nail on her right hand ... and something about her breasts bug me. Not saying bigger is better, they just seem not quite right.
  • Mon Amour Antoinette - 12/16/2008
  • the lips are a little awkward
    and i honestly don't really like
    how the color of the skirt doesn't really match the shirt.
    maybe it would if it were a darker blue?
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