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  • Title: Cagalli...
  • Artist: Chun-Li_fighter
  • Description: Actually, I'm far from being proud of this drawing, I kinda hate it, the reasons why I'm posting it is so I can get hints or critics, help me get this better please.
  • Date: 11/29/2008
  • Tags: cagalli gundam seed wedding dress
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • ObligatedOctopi - 12/03/2008
  • no offense... but at first i thought it was a man in a wedding dress. idk, i kinda don't like the dress in general...it looks kinda like it could be in an action-packed sci fi adventuer! lol, i crack myself up!
    sorry, i'm really not trying to make fun of you or anything.
    maybe you should try drawing a dress that's a little more traditional.
    i agree with the people below me who suggest posing a mannequin.
  • Kinshou Mitsukai - 12/03/2008
  • uhm...there really is only one fix for something like this...just don't draw anymore...
    I'm just kidding lol I drew like this back in grade 5, but with practice it gets better. Like the person down there said, try looking at a mannequin, even a picture from a magazine helps. Examine different poses and try sketching them. Also, you could try drawing your hand. Make a fist or something then draw it. With a bit of practice, it gets better and easier.
  • Picturesque Honey - 11/30/2008
  • well her shoulders and whole upper torso are mis-shapen so is the rest of the body. maby try to pose a maniquen when drawing people but otherwise its okey.
  • Bubbly Plain Jane - 11/30/2008
  • The only thing that bothers me is her right fist. Dont you think from this point of view that some of the fingers are visable in the back?
  • umasi - 11/29/2008
  • try working on anatomy more her arms look a little off, and the four lines next to her right arm should conform with her body where you have that horizontal line to show her chest, not just go through it. i'm guessing theres some wind to move her dress and veil so i would have her veil hug the back of her head a little more and show some movement in her hair. besides that the hair is great and so are the eyes and color scheme.
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