- Title: out of MiDnight
- Artist: Dee_lya
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Description:
I made it when the day is goin' midday but the tittle is Midnight :sweat:
i :heart: night coz it's quiet and calm....:D
how do u think?
plizz leave me a bunch of comments and vote!
oh, and dun 4get 2 view my other picts in drawings and photoghraph entry! :XD: - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: midnight outof
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Nerai Kentouken - 12/06/2008
- you are supposed ot make it look like you are staring at your charachter in real life. another ting is the contours of her whole body, it just looks like a big stick figure. i suggest reading an antomy book and gettign ahold of the muscle structure. Keep drawing kid, this post is ment to help you!
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- Nerai Kentouken - 12/06/2008
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Ah....i can see quite a few mistakes at first glance...
Here we go. first thing that caught my eye was this...the head-to-body ratio is all messed up. the width fo her head is much larger than that of her shoulders, in good anatomy, the head only comes within a few inches of the shoulder line. the next thing is this, You didnt shade all that well, therefore not giving her a sence of volume, makeing her look like a flat piece of paper - Report As Spam
- Arche Elf - 12/06/2008
- this is copied from Mermaid Melody Pichi Pichi Pitch the manga...
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- Maiden501 - 12/06/2008
- Good work! smile
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- DaFunkyPunk1 - 12/06/2008
- cool picture
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