- by ChaoticNano |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 03/07/2009 |
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- Title: girl with mask
- Artist: ChaoticNano
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Description:
and here goes an other girl hope you like it also i coud use some advises to get better so pleas be honest on what you like and what is wrong
as well ty for stoping by to see my drawing
- Date: 03/07/2009
- Tags: girl with mask
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Miss Sable - 07/30/2009
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She hardly has any shoulders. gonk And it throws off the placement of her collar bone.
Trust me though I did the EXACT same thing when I first started to draw. But as you can see with my newer work I have improved on that a lot.
Fear not though.... Humans are among one of the hardest things to draw.
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- Black Rose Vampress - 03/13/2009
- Only thing I find wrong is some of the lines,maybe you could clean it up a bit,like on the arm
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- GMOD465 - 03/10/2009
- 2 tell the truth id ilike it blah srry
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- gatemansgc - 03/09/2009
- excellent work! something is bothering me about the ear, though... domokun stargate
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- --Daughter of death--5 - 03/08/2009
- VEry nice coca this is my favorite drawing =D
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- Pandicake - 03/07/2009
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The shading is pretty nice, but it seems like you tend to make your lines fuzzy, which is bad. It's a little out of proportion; the ears should be bigger, there should be an upper lip...
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- Coopzy - 03/07/2009
- Nice. I like most of it but, the slight grin doesn't seem right w/ that huge eye patch. Y'know? Like I would think that would make a person more on gaurd and uneasy. But, y'know, anyway that YOU see it.
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