- by Super Jacky Yay |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 06/04/2009 |
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- Title: Request: carlyprovost
- Artist: Super Jacky Yay
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Description:
A request made from carlyprovost for her avi to be drawn.....
The right arm bugs me a bit, and something about the legs...huh, I'll figure it out sometime.
Anyways,
I do comissions also for those of you I don't know, so feel free to name your own price (im not stingy) and I'll see what I can do.
Artwork (c) Mahself - Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: request carlyprovost
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Comments (5 Comments)
- D-Curtis-X - 06/08/2009
- ah...yea thats it...i guess...good job by the way
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- Kyousouka - 06/07/2009
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The proportions are off, perhaps that is what is bugging you. The arms are too short, too thin, and the hands are too small. The knees are at weird levels and are signified by odd scribbles. The stripes on the shirt do not follow the body, which flattens the entire image out.
At least you're not hiding the hands or trying to cheat in other ways, you're actually trying to draw some of the more difficult parts of the body. Keep it up and you'll get better. - Report As Spam
- DarkToxicTears - 06/05/2009
- nice! biggrin
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- carlyprovost - 06/05/2009
- thank you Jake!! :] the thing that really gets me in the picture is the hands. i could neverr draw good hands like that (if i could draw at all xD) and the eye is gorgous ^^ thanks [:
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- oymanhigh - 06/05/2009
- cute and cool
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