- by DreamLandMassacre |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 04/14/2010 |
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- Title: Hof Page four
- Artist: DreamLandMassacre
- Description: Hands of fate Page four, the rest of the pages are back so go take a look
- Date: 04/14/2010
- Tags: page three
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DreamLandMassacre - 04/29/2010
- There are other pages to this comic, not only this one ^^ So if you like this one then feel free to check out the rest.
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- purplelover21 - 04/28/2010
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the 'lines between her bikini' look really showy along w/ the rest, but its reallt sick bsides dat!!!!
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- Aka no Aki - 04/26/2010
- Clothes designs are good. The designs of the characters are a little bit Mary Sueish. The hands are pretty bad and in the last panel the boy's arm is too long and her hair just looks off. I like your layout and it portrays what I think you want it to, but it's a little impersonal. It makes the reader feel like standing on the sidelines and watching it, which is bad for a manga/comic but hard to get out of. And make her arm narrow above the wrist. Good potential.
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- Crimson Akuma - 04/26/2010
- hmmm... not bad.
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- ninja3906 - 04/20/2010
- This is pretty sick smile
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- demiurgeema - 04/19/2010
- Good work. I like her boots.
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