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  • Title: Shadow's Grave
  • Artist: Darkprincess395
  • Description: Shadow's Grave
    Raini The Hedgehog... is the only one there... cause believe it or not she was there with... Maria and Shadow and has been their friends for along time.
    But little does Raini.... know that.... Shadow really isn't dead....yet....:3
  • Date: 11/09/2010
  • Tags: shadows grave
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 11/13/2010
  • -continued-
    Shadow instead of taking an image of him and paste it. If I am right, this work needs to be 100% yours and since you didn't exactly draw that Shadow then you're kind of breaking the Art Arena rules (I won't report this so I'm just warning you to watch out for that). razz I would critique more on the details and proportions, but I'll leave at it is for now (unless you want me to critique more, which you should PM or send me a comment on my profile page). Keep practicing. 2/5
  • Phantom-of_Winter - 11/13/2010
  • : I'm sorry to say, but Raini sounds like a mary sue in your description. Try to remodel your character a bit. Now for the picture... too much negative space! Crop out the left side after the grave and maybe some of the floor too. Secondly, where is Raini's lower proportion of her body? It's like the grass consumed her legs! Make sure you don't leave out important parts of the body and especially when you're trying to draw your character in certain positions. Lastly, you should had just drawn
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