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In the dark of my heart
In the light of my eyes
I feel sorrow for those who cry
They cry for the earth
They cry for above
They cry for the people who once were in love
Their hopes reach the sky
Their goals they are great
And when their dream comes they pray it's not late
These people are scarce
These people are few
These people you see ,they're me and they're you!
DON'T GIVE UP ON A DREAM BECAUSE THEY CAN COME TRUE
- by madbrad222 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- caine knowles - 11/27/2009
- i wish all your dreams come true
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- DragonAssassinTannaquil - 06/10/2009
- This is very deep. I can't believe you wrote it in 3rd grade. O.o Beautiful poetry, and nice rhyming! wink
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- Purple Gray Dragon - 12/23/2008
- Awesome, and to think you wrote that when you were in third grade.
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- tiny angel wings - 12/21/2008
- very nice. worthy of 5 stars. hope to see more like this.
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- QueenOsaka - 12/20/2008
- That is a very beautiful Poem Brad. smile
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- lind09a - 12/17/2008
- very moving. well writen. It was a nice surprise- not at all what I would have expected from you. 5/5
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- hotsteppin - 12/17/2008
- great job......5/5
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