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Darkness, a shadow, falls over me.
My judgment has already been cast.
Eyes clouded to the point where I can't see.
Thinking things out is always left for last.
Indigo fire points out the way.
Hard to tell what's really right and wrong.
I should never be allowed to stay.
I don't know if I can be here that long.
Purified light, reconstructs my withered soul.
Show me how worldly lifetimes are spent,
clean up this life that's been smeared in coal.
Maybe my mind can be put up for rent.
Forever bound to the reaches of space.
Soon to vanish, without even a trace.
- Title: Shadow Soul
- Artist: HCTotorro
- Description: I wrote this poem a few years back when I used to be all doom and gloom status. I used to think the absolute worst about everything. Especially during the holidays.
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: shadow soul
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gabbytag - 07/20/2009
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it sounds a little more like a song to me cuz it flows sooo well....great job
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- 123yuy - 07/18/2009
- that was relly good
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- Noigel Retsam - 07/16/2009
- i feelur pain man... im atheist but my parents still take me 2 church it sucks
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- Noigel Retsam - 07/16/2009
- dont listin 2 the asswhipes who tell u is sucks it is singal handedly the most dark emo depressing thing i have ever heard u inspire me
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- Noigel Retsam - 07/16/2009
- itz just so awesome and dark and depressing 5 stars my freind
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- Noigel Retsam - 07/16/2009
- Man that wuz awesome u my friend r a warrior poet
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- 8m0 d1u6 - 07/15/2009
- kool
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