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Christmas eve, the night is here.
Holly hangs from candles, dear.
Careful placed the presents, filled with cheer.
Its Christmas eve, a night of wonder.
Yet my heart is torn asunder.
The love I lost is in the ground.
The time we lost is never found.
I dream of spending these days with you.
I take a walk, heart filled with dread.
To that yard where you lay your head.
I'll place a present, never to be opened.
And regret all those words unspoken.
Dearest love you candle unlit.
Never again will life caress your lips.
I miss you so, my lost sweet love.
Rest in peace, with the stars above.
On Christmas day I'll fake a smile.
Wile you dwell in my heart all the wile.
It breaks my heart that you will never see.
Just how much you meant to me.
Its on these days I miss you most.
And though your skin is cold and dead.
A tear my eyes will always shed.
Christmas day is drawing near.
But it's you that I hold dear.
- by Yur-Yur Yuri |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: A Christmas Tear.
- Artist: Yur-Yur Yuri
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Description:
A Christmas poem for the best friend and love I lost. She died just 4 days after New Years Day. I love and miss her. RIP Alie J Scott.
( And yeah I wrote this in like 15 minutes...but I still think its good :D )) - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: christmas love sorrow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- squirrle_man69 - 12/19/2008
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im sorry for ur friend
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- squirrle_man69 - 12/19/2008
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lol, nice, ^^
didnt make me cry but its a good poem, ^^
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- Lattiezy - 12/19/2008
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that was totally awesome, im sorry though
5/5
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- dezgrz - 12/19/2008
- I never cry even in very sad times but this poem made me shed a tear =[
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- dark-memories27 - 12/19/2008
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i love this poem and im srry for the one u lost
i give it 5/5
great job - Report As Spam
- Squiidgy - 12/19/2008
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i started crying after i read this poem T.T
awsome job tho..... sry that it happened sad - Report As Spam
- XXS1MPLY_M3XX - 12/19/2008
- that was great..and sad..but still good =D
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