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Twas the day after Christmas
And all through the town
Little kids were found playing
With toys all around.
Moms and dads were at home
Snug and warm in their chairs
Drinking egg nog and cider
As they dreamed of warm air.
The postman was busy
With after Christmas mail
From those who were locked up
In the local county jail.
Old Santa was finished
With this year ends trip
As the elves celebrated
Cups of tea they did sip.
Twas the day after Christmas
And all through the town
If one looked really hard
Good cheer could be found.
- by Shanra the Dragon Bard |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Day After Christmas
- Artist: Shanra the Dragon Bard
- Description: An off-the-cuff poem for the season that I just now composed specifically for the contest. Hope you enjoy it.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: after christmas
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Midnight_Dragon32 - 12/21/2008
- very nice ^.=.^
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- MustangDragon - 12/21/2008
- A charming poem! Makes me feel like I live in a small town somewhere, knowing everyone and with lots of friends. Good job! smile
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- The Egyptian Dragon - 12/20/2008
- I like it a lot! smile
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- White Dragon Of Legend - 12/20/2008
- Nicely accented with the Twas's everywhere!
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- ZeldaXnXRainbowsss - 12/19/2008
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I liked the way you said twas and I like it. It is cute.
XD, I wish I could write like that. - Report As Spam
- Sedec - 12/19/2008
- Refreshing, much better than "The Night Before Christmas!" The only spot I saw for improvement was the jail bit. I didn't get it at first, but when I did I thought it was funny smile 5/5
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- Shanra the Dragon Bard - 12/19/2008
- Draggonflame, it was so nice of you to drop by and leave a comment. It has been far too long.
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