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White Christmas
Everywhere is white
I began to feel lonely
Although I got a mixed feeling
Happy and lonely is what I have in my mind
Snowflake fall and land in the tip of my tongue
Brrr Cold
I wonder was it meant for the world to end soon or later
Maybe it to bring the light
I don't know
But feeling it what make white christmas mystery
- by Star_Dream_Catcher |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: White Christmas
- Artist: Star_Dream_Catcher
- Description: A feeling about first seeing a snow
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: white christmas
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Comments (3 Comments)
- FabricPanda - 05/23/2010
- i love it
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- another_lame_username - 09/10/2009
- Poems don't have to rhyme. It's not very often a person can rhyme throughout all the verses without ruining what could have been great. It's a lovely poem just as it is now, well done.
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- Candy Cane Bunny - 12/16/2008
- If it rhymed it would be better :3
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