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The holiday season..,
A time of joy and fun,
Is a total living hell for me..,
My parents fight as we cut the turkey,
And I think of cutting other things..,
My sibblings yell at me for my imperfections,
As I curse them out,
Never mind that..,
I still stay thankful for my food,
House,
And the gift of life,
Even though I hate life in general..,
I never take it for granite,
For others have it alot worse than me..,
So I stay thankful..,
And I always will,
Even if the worst happens to me,
I will always be enternally thankful,
For the gift of life and change from god..,
So I guess in conclusion..,
The holidays aren't all that bad...
- by TheLiberator12 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: The Holiday Season..
- Artist: TheLiberator12
- Description: Its a little sad...but i have to sumit my perspective!!
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: holiday season
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Red Cross Robbery - 10/16/2009
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"My parents fight as we cut the turkey,
And I think of cutting other things..,"
Really lame line homie.
"I never take it for granite,"
Granite is a type of rock. I think you mean the word granted.
Fix those, and it wouldn't be terrible of a poem, I think you've got some great potential biggrin - Report As Spam
- TheLiberator12 - 02/26/2009
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hi people!!!!! its sucks but im to lazy to edit of delete it!
(so i don't need your critism cause it'll be gone soon) - Report As Spam
- xxxemo-princess666xxx - 02/03/2009
- ur getin off topic in it. u go from sad, hapy sad hapy, n then. boring ending....im sry if tht dus hapn to u..same here, but u may want to tak mor time editing it. u dont put comas aftr evry line, only after breaks where u need 2 breathe. pm me if u need help.
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- cheetah2750 - 12/18/2008
- I seriously cried when i read this. I mean it too! I will not abuse u anymore! Is Christmas like that too? How come I'm the only one of the four of us that ever cries? I feel so soft and vulnerable! I love u so much, I guess I take it all for granted.
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- cheetah2750 - 12/18/2008
- oh... it that really what life is like for u? u don't need pity, do u? I promise to be nicer to u!
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