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Talking helps. Sometimes,
Walking doesn't do anything at all, but get you places
You're walking, thinking that your problems are going away
By not thinking of them at all.
And there's the wind;
(Thinking to itself)
"Screw your hair.
I need a walk too..."
It's not going anywhere, but neither are we
And on top of things, it's cold.
You thought you were safe,
Haha, I fail.
You have aspirations, I, death.
Who's really helping you?
I don't even think I'm on my side for this one,
If any at all.
You could say that. Perhaps,
Destroying things is fun,
More so when you built them.
Saboteur, can't help but love to hate.
Silence is golden.
No wonder I'm poor.
Excuses?
None.
Words suck.
Nothing is what you want it to be.
If there is one, God knows it's hard.
To try, to attempt, to fail.
Scratch that, red.
Even when you're at your best,
Language betrays you.
"I'm at a loss of words".
They ran from you, abuser.
Damn experience, read.
Too much scratching,
Damn. Experience. Read.
Better?
If not, they have pills for that.
Push the buttons,
Pop the pills.
Pop the button?
Push the pills.
And when it's over,
The river flows.
Salty greatness,
Yum.
- Title: A B C D E Fail
- Artist: LameStain
- Description: Just something that came to me that I happened to write down.
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: lamestain fail poem
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Fyre Lupos - 01/06/2010
- great peom, long good everything lol, no grammer errors 5/5 well done -patts back-
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- Legendary Pirate Plasma - 07/14/2009
- A rant in an almost poetic fashion. It's lengthy, which is usually a plus. It had no noticeable grammatical errors that I could think of. As much as I dislike the emotional tones of the piece, I have to give you a full score. 5/5 from me.
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- Camera Stellata - 04/02/2009
- Out of the twenty or so poems ive just reviewed this ones the first thats really leapt out at me and forced me to think for a moment. 5/5
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- muffin-la - 12/18/2008
- that is definately a failure.and i mean this in the best possible way.5
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- LameStain - 12/18/2008
- It's more or less a rant about theories of emotions, how expression helps (or doesn't). I wish I could remember what exactly I was thinking of when I wrote this.
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- Apocalyptic Beatdown - 12/17/2008
- this scares me because it is poetically unparalleled with the beautiful way it was put together but for the life of me i can't seem to figure what we are talking about here...
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